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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 24, 2024

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Day 46

Third, we need to have a positive thinking and an open heart. These are also important factors in order to create a happy and healthy life. Moreover, about external factors, we also need to create a fresh, and comfortable environment. Being care a little bit and creating the environment with eco-friendly materials instead of chemical will be useful in maintaining our health.
Human can have a healthy life through controlling physical health, positive thinking, clean environment, balanced diet, and regular physical exercises. We can say that if we want to live long and healthy, we need to have awareness of the environment and control our body well.


Thứ ba, bạn phải có một tư duy tích cực và một tấm lòng rộng mở. Đây cũng là một yếu tố quan trọng tạo nên một cuộc sống tươi vui và khỏe mạnh. Ngoài ra, về yếu tố bên ngoài, cần tạo ra môi trường sống trong lành, dễ chịu. Dành sự quan tâm hơn một chút và tạo không gian sống bằng những chất liệu thân thiện với môi trường thay vì những chất liệu hóa học, điều này sẽ rất hữu ích trong việc duy trì sức khỏe.
Con người có thể duy trì một cuộc sống khỏe mạnh thông qua việc quản lý sức khỏe thể chất, suy nghĩ tích cực, môi trường sạch sẽ; thông qua việc ăn uống đúng cách và tập thể dục đều đặn. Nói cách khác, chúng ta cần có thái độ quan tâm đến môi trường xung quanh và quản lý cơ thể tốt nếu muốn sống lâu và khỏe mạnh.

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Third, wWe need to have athink positive thinking andly and have an open heart.

Third would only make sense if there were two items preceding this

These are also important factors in order to create a happy and healthy life.

Moreover, aboutAs for external factors, we also need to create a refresh,ing and comfortable environment.

I'm unclear what adjective you intended here with "fresh" but it doesn't quite work in this context

Being care a little bit and creating theCreating an environment with eco-friendly materials instead of chemicals will be useful inhelp maintaining our health.

Humans can have a healthy life throughby controlling physical health, positive thinking, clean environment, balanced diet, and regular physical exercises.

We can say that iIf we want to live long and healthy, we need to havbe awareness of the environment and stay in control of our body well.

kailynhuynh96's avatar
kailynhuynh96

Dec. 25, 2024

74

Thank you for your correction.

Day 46


Third, we need to have a positive thinking and an open heart.


Third, wWe need to have athink positive thinking andly and have an open heart.

Third would only make sense if there were two items preceding this

These are also important factors in order to create a happy and healthy life.


These are also important factors in order to create a happy and healthy life.

Moreover, about external factors, we also need to create a fresh, and comfortable environment.


Moreover, aboutAs for external factors, we also need to create a refresh,ing and comfortable environment.

I'm unclear what adjective you intended here with "fresh" but it doesn't quite work in this context

Being care a little bit and creating the environment with eco-friendly materials instead of chemical will be useful in maintaining our health.


Being care a little bit and creating theCreating an environment with eco-friendly materials instead of chemicals will be useful inhelp maintaining our health.

Human can have a healthy life through controlling physical health, positive thinking, clean environment, balanced diet, and regular physical exercises.


Humans can have a healthy life throughby controlling physical health, positive thinking, clean environment, balanced diet, and regular physical exercises.

We can say that if we want to live long and healthy, we need to have awareness of the environment and control our body well.


We can say that iIf we want to live long and healthy, we need to havbe awareness of the environment and stay in control of our body well.

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