Day 44: Why do I want to write?

I hope this is what you were going for!

I think that a good story can change your life forever as, like it happened to me.

If you have wondered why a lot of people love K-pop songs, there's a lot of reasons but one of those it'is because a lot of K-pop songs have helped a lot of people around the world who try to deal with depressive thoughts.

"It's" is short for "it is", which is the reason why it has the ' in-between the "it" and "s"! I hope this makes sense.

K-pops songs try to tell you that you're not alone, you're important and you're special in the way you are.

Many people say "in your own way" as well! Though, sometimes it doesn't help some people, lol.

There's a song that I like to mucha lot which is called "She's in The Rain", it's a song about a boy who feels sad because his friend hurts herself, and he tries to makehelp her feel that she's not alone.

"I like too much" could be a little dramatic unless exaggerating, but "I like a lot" could also work! Also "make" could sound a little forceful, so "help" could work better. Though, it's not required, it just sounds more natural :)

Day 44: Why Do I wWant to wWrite?

I think that a good story can change your life forever as it has happened to me.

賛成しました。

Just aMerely one movie was enough to change the way that I used to think.

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いいですね。

Day 44: Why I wWant to wWrite?

I think that a good story can change your life forever , as has happened to me.

Just aone movie was enough to change the way that I used to think.

What you wrote isn't wrong, but to me "one" works better here than "a"

If you have wondered why a lot of people love K-pop songs, there's are a lot of reasons but o. One of those it's because a lot of K-pop songsem is that they have helped a lot of people around the world who try to deal with depressive thoughts.

Replaced K-pop songs with "they" in the next sentence to reduce redundancy

K-pops songs try to tell you that you're not alone, you're important, and you're special in the way you are.

There's a song that I like to mucha lot which is called "She's in The Rain"," it's a song about a boy who feels sad because his friend hurts herself, and he tries to make her feel that she's not alone.

We don't use "too much" to mean "a lot" in a positive way in English

Day 44: Why Do I wWant to wWrite?

I think that a good story can change your life forever as, like what happened to me.

If you have wondered why a lot of people love K-pop songs, there's a lot of reasons but o. One of those it's because a lot of K-pop songs have helped a lot of people around the world who tryare trying to deal with depressive thoughts.

K-pops songs try to tell you that you're not alone, you're important and you're special in the way you are.

There's a song that I like to muchreally like which is called "She's in Tthe Rain", i. It's a song about a boy who feels sad because his friend hurts herself, and he tries to make her feel that she's not alone.

Day 44: Why Do I wWant to wWrite?

I think that a good story can change your life forever as, just like it happened to me.

If you have wondered why a lot of people love K-pop songs, there's a lot of reasons, but one of those it's because a lot of K-pop songs have helped a lot of people around the world who try toare dealing with depressive thoughtson.

"negative thoughts" is a phrase we used from time to time. It's not as strong of a word as "depression" though.

K-pops songs try to tell you that you're not alone, you're important and you're special injust the way you are.

There's a song that I like too much which is called "She's in The Rain", i." It's a song about a boy who feels sad because his friend hurts herself, and he tries to make her feel that she's not alone.