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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 19, 2023

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Day 43: A Lot of Things to Do

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them? that's my daily life. As I said before, I like almost everything but I have also responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person. I would like to live forever to learn everything that I can. My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Gardening, reading, listening to music and reading manga, and soon dancing. I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them. Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my motivation and discipline is the problem. There's a song called "Mediocrity City", that song totally represents me (hahaha).
Thanks for reading!!!

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Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do manylots of things but not having the enough time to do them?

"Lots of" sounds more natural :)

tThat's my daily life.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

I would like to live forever to learn everything that I can.

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Gardening, reading, listening to music and reading manga, and soon, dancing.

"The following" isn't necessary, but it still makes sense! :)

I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my motivation and discipline is the problem.

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", that song totally represents me (hahaha).

Thanks for reading!!!

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Good job! Those are good hobbies :)

Day 43: A Lot of Things to Do

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

tThat's my daily life.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

I would like to live forever to learn everything that I can.

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and, reading manga, and soon dancing.

I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them, and sometimes I think that I have the enough time, but my motivation and discipline is the problem.

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", t. That song totally represents me (hahaha).

Thanks for reading!!!

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Good job! You have a lot on your plate, don't you? You can look up some time management tips and make a plan. That might help you with everything you want to do.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 20, 2023

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Oooh I'll do some research about time management. Thank you so much for the advice!! You are very kind!! Thanks for your corrections!

Day 43: A Lot of Things to Do

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

tThat's my everydaily life.

:(

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like any normal person.

I would like to live forever to learn everything that I can.

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and, reading manga, and, soon, dancing.

やった!

I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my lack of motivation and discipline is the problem.

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", and that song totally represents me (hahaha).

Thanks for reading!!!

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上手に書けています!頑張って下さい!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 20, 2023

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ありがとうございました。意図すること

Day 43: A Lot of Things to Do

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

No need ‘the’!
“Do you have enough time to do it today?”
“Did she give you enough time to complete it?”

tThat's my daily life.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

Also is generally used before the verb!

In a perfect wourld like to, I would live forever toso that I could learn everything that I can.there is to know.

This a very very natural way to put it !

My hobbies right now arinclude the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and, reading manga, and soon dancing.

Better usage with include !
I like manga too!

I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my motivation and discipline is the problem.

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", ithat song totally represents me (hahaha).

Thanks for reading!!!

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It’s ok to take breaks from our hobbies!!!! 😄 great work as always

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 20, 2023

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I'll try to take breaks, thanks for the advice!! Wow it's cool that we both like manga 😲

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 20, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections!!

Day 43: A Lot of Things to Do

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

tThat's my daily life.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

I would like to live forever toso I could learn everything that I can.

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and reading manga, and soon dancing.

I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my motivation and discipline is the problem.

There's a song called "Mediocrity City",; that song totally represents me (hahaha).

Thanks for reading!!!

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Totally understand how you feel! I'm trying to keep my hobby list small because I know I can't balance them though, lol

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 20, 2023

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Wow I would like to have a small list of hobbies, too. Thanks for your corrections!!

Day 43: A Lot of Things to Do


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Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?


Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

No need ‘the’! “Do you have enough time to do it today?” “Did she give you enough time to complete it?”

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do many things but not having the enough time to do them?

Have you ever had that feeling of wanting to do manylots of things but not having the enough time to do them?

"Lots of" sounds more natural :)

that's my daily life.


tThat's my daily life.

tThat's my daily life.

tThat's my everydaily life.

:(

tThat's my daily life.

tThat's my daily life.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have also responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.


As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

Also is generally used before the verb!

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like any normal person.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

As I said before, I like almost everything but I have alsoalso have responsibilities in my daily life like a normal person.

I would like to live forever to learn everything that I can.


I would like to live forever toso I could learn everything that I can.

In a perfect wourld like to, I would live forever toso that I could learn everything that I can.there is to know.

This a very very natural way to put it !

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My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Gardening, reading, listening to music and reading manga, and soon dancing.


My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and reading manga, and soon dancing.

My hobbies right now arinclude the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and, reading manga, and soon dancing.

Better usage with include ! I like manga too!

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and, reading manga, and, soon, dancing.

やった!

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Ggardening, reading, listening to music and, reading manga, and soon dancing.

My hobbies right now are the following: creative writing, Japanese learning, English learning, exercising, Gardening, reading, listening to music and reading manga, and soon, dancing.

"The following" isn't necessary, but it still makes sense! :)

I have many hobbies but that doesn't mean that I'm an expert in every one of them.


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Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my motivation and discipline is the problem.


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Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my motivation and discipline is the problem.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them and sometimes I think that I have the enough time but my lack of motivation and discipline is the problem.

Sometimes I think that I don't have the enough time to practice every one of them, and sometimes I think that I have the enough time, but my motivation and discipline is the problem.

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There's a song called "Mediocrity City", that song totally represents me (hahaha).


There's a song called "Mediocrity City",; that song totally represents me (hahaha).

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", ithat song totally represents me (hahaha).

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", and that song totally represents me (hahaha).

There's a song called "Mediocrity City", t. That song totally represents me (hahaha).

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Thanks for reading!!!


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