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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 18, 2023

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Day 42: Calisthenics

I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics. I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me. Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly. So I think that calisthenics is a good idea. I'm going to practice break dance too, in order to make excersicing enjoyable. Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips. I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week. I hope that I can do it soon.
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!

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Day 42: Calisthenics

I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.

I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.

Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.

So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.

I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.

I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.

I hope that I can do it soon.

Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!

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Good job! That sounds fun :)

Day 42: Calisthenics

I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.

I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.

Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.

So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.

I'm going to practice break danceing, too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

やった!

Today I started exercising, I started by doing push-ups and tricep dips.

いいですよ。

I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.

I hope that I can do it soon.

Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!

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おめでとうございます!上手に書けています!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 19, 2023

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ありがとうございました。!!!

Day 42: Calisthenics

I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.

I think that it's still too early for me to go to the gym for me.

Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.

So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.

I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

Today I started exercising,. I started doing push-ups and triceps dips.

I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.

I hope that I can do it soon.

Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!

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Good job, buddy! Have fun with your exercises and dancing.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 19, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections I'll try! I'll do my best

Day 42: Calisthenics

I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.

I think that it's still way too early to gofor me to start going to the gym for me.

More natural !!!! And has that colloquial feel with the ‘way too early’, if you want to sound more formal you can just say ‘it’s still too early for me…’

Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.

So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.

I'm going to practicse break dance too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

Practice - medical
Practise - a skill, to improve, to rehearse

Today when I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.

It’s in the past, so you would say ‘when’ to place it in the past with the participle ‘started’.

I want to start break dancing but I haven't had thean opportunity to start it this week.

More natural

Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!

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Nice 🤘👌 I want to get into it too, in particular with pull ups

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 19, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections. Pull ups are hard but worth it!! Good luck

Day 42: Calisthenics

I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.

Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.

So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.

I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.

I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.

I hope that I can do it soon.

Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!

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Your English is so good! Great job making the decision to commit to an exercise plan. I agree with you - for me exercise needs to feel enjoyable and not like a chore, otherwise I cannot retain the habit. We are all different in what we might find enjoyable... for me, it took years to realize that I love to run outdoors. Now I look forward to it every day and I feel so much healthier.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 19, 2023

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Right? I love to run outdoors, too. It's amazing that you found a way to make exercising something fun and that you are now healthier, keep it up!! Thanks for your corrections!!!

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I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.


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I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.


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I think that it's still way too early to gofor me to start going to the gym for me.

More natural !!!! And has that colloquial feel with the ‘way too early’, if you want to sound more formal you can just say ‘it’s still too early for me…’

I think that it's still too early for me to go to the gym for me.

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Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.


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So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.


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I'm going to practice break dance too, in order to make excersicing enjoyable.


I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

I'm going to practicse break dance too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

Practice - medical Practise - a skill, to improve, to rehearse

I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

I'm going to practice break danceing, too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

やった!

I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.

Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.


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Today when I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.

It’s in the past, so you would say ‘when’ to place it in the past with the participle ‘started’.

Today I started exercising,. I started doing push-ups and triceps dips.

Today I started exercising, I started by doing push-ups and tricep dips.

いいですよ。

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I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.


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I want to start break dancing but I haven't had thean opportunity to start it this week.

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I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.

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I hope that I can do it soon.


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Thanks for reading!!


Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!


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