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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 11, 2023

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Day 4: Starting a New Bullet Journal

I got a new notebook, and I decided to use it as a bullet journal for this year. Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you would need to organize your life, everything in one notebook. But I'm a begginer using this system so I'm just using my bujo only for my to-do lists. I divide one page into seven for all the days of the week, in that page I write down my tasks. Then I divide another page into two, one part is for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections. Maybe you can say that it's easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

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Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you would need to organize your life, - everything in one notebook.

But I'm a begginner using this system, so I'm just using my bujo only for myfor to-do lists.

"just" and "only" are kind of redundant; 2nd "my" is redundant as well

I divide one page into seven for all thesections for each days of the week, i. In that page I write down my tasks.

Then I divide another page into two, one part is for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

goals and reflections - awesome!

Maybe you can say that it's easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

I agree - it allows you to slow down and think and you get to see your unique handwriting instead of computer fonts

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Great writing, have fun with your bujo!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 12, 2023

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Thank you, I'm having fun with my bujo but I'm going to have more fun when I start using habit trackers. Thanks for all your corrections!

I got a new notebook, and I have decided to use it this year as a bullet journal for this year.

Bullet Jjournaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you wouldelse you need to organize your life, everything in one notebook.

But I'm a begginernew at using this system so I'm just using my bujo onlyllet journal for my to-do lists.

using 'only' is redundant because you already use 'just' which implies a single purpose

I divide one page into seven for all thefor the seven days of the week, in that page Iand then write down my tasks.

Then I divide another page into two, one part ishalves, one for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

Maybe you can say that it's would be easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 12, 2023

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thanks for all your corrections!

I got a new notebook, and I decided to use it as a bullet journal for this year.

Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and, or whatever you would need to organize your life, everythingall in one notebook.

(But/However,) I'm a begginner using this system, so I'm just using my bujo onlyjournal for my to-do lists.

In English class, we're taught not to use "But" at the beginning of sentences. In practice though, many natives still do. If this is an essay for school, you might want to use "However" instead, but if this is just a journal, it's not an issue in my opinion.

I divide one page into seven for all the days of the week, and in that page I write down my tasks.

Then I divide another page into two,: one part is for my weekly goals, and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

Maybe you can say that it's easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

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Nice work! Sounds like a good way to organize everything. :)

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 12, 2023

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It's a good system, you can check it out if you want. Thanks for all your corrections!

Day 4: Starting a New Bullet Journal

I got a new notebook, and I decided to use it as a bullet journal for this year.

Since "I" is the subject of both parts, we shorten it this way.

Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you would need to organize your life, e. Everything is in one notebook.

Wow!

But I'm a begginner using this system, however, so I'm just using my bujo only for my to-do lists only.

I divide one page into seven for all the days of the week, i and then on that page I write down my tasks.

Then I divide another page into two,: one part is for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

You can use a colon here to set off a list of two or more.

Nice!

Maybe you can say that it's easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

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I love that last sentence! I think it's beautiful. Besides, when you become a famous writer, we'll get to put your journals in museums. ^^ As always, very well done!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 12, 2023

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aawww you are so kind (ꈍ‿ꈍ) thanks for all your corrections

Day 4: Starting a New Bullet Journal


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I got a new notebook, and I decided to use it as a bullet journal for this year.


I got a new notebook, and I decided to use it as a bullet journal for this year.

Since "I" is the subject of both parts, we shorten it this way.

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I got a new notebook, and I have decided to use it this year as a bullet journal for this year.

Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you would need to organize your life, everything in one notebook.


Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you would need to organize your life, e. Everything is in one notebook.

Wow!

Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and, or whatever you would need to organize your life, everythingall in one notebook.

Bullet Jjournaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you wouldelse you need to organize your life, everything in one notebook.

Bullet Journaling is basically a system where you can have an agenda, a calendar, to-do lists, a diary, habit trackers, mood trackers, savings trackers, period trackers, wish lists and whatever you would need to organize your life, - everything in one notebook.

But I'm a begginer using this system so I'm just using my bujo only for my to-do lists.


But I'm a begginner using this system, however, so I'm just using my bujo only for my to-do lists only.

(But/However,) I'm a begginner using this system, so I'm just using my bujo onlyjournal for my to-do lists.

In English class, we're taught not to use "But" at the beginning of sentences. In practice though, many natives still do. If this is an essay for school, you might want to use "However" instead, but if this is just a journal, it's not an issue in my opinion.

But I'm a begginernew at using this system so I'm just using my bujo onlyllet journal for my to-do lists.

using 'only' is redundant because you already use 'just' which implies a single purpose

But I'm a begginner using this system, so I'm just using my bujo only for myfor to-do lists.

"just" and "only" are kind of redundant; 2nd "my" is redundant as well

I divide one page into seven for all the days of the week, in that page I write down my tasks.


I divide one page into seven for all the days of the week, i and then on that page I write down my tasks.

I divide one page into seven for all the days of the week, and in that page I write down my tasks.

I divide one page into seven for all thefor the seven days of the week, in that page Iand then write down my tasks.

I divide one page into seven for all thesections for each days of the week, i. In that page I write down my tasks.

Then I divide another page into two, one part is for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.


Then I divide another page into two,: one part is for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

You can use a colon here to set off a list of two or more. Nice!

Then I divide another page into two,: one part is for my weekly goals, and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

Then I divide another page into two, one part ishalves, one for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

Then I divide another page into two, one part is for my weekly goals and the other part is for my weekly reflections.

goals and reflections - awesome!

Maybe you can say that it's easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.


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Maybe you can say that it's would be easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

Maybe you can say that it's easier and faster to use an app, but I think that having a physical place to organize your life, dreams and goals is more romantic.

I agree - it allows you to slow down and think and you get to see your unique handwriting instead of computer fonts

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