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Jevon

Jan. 25, 2025

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DAY 4

我觉得今天和朋友沟通不好。我要告诉你今天发现了的事。我早上去打了羽毛球,在那儿,我让我的朋友在我周围不舒服,也许因为我说得不多。然后,我们一起去了食堂,我自己只玩手机,我的朋友都在互相沟通,这让我看起来不感兴趣。可是那不是对的,我想跟朋友沟通,但是我没有自信。我知道我很笨,我很后悔。


I feel that today my communication with my friends is bad. I want to tell you about what is happening today. In the morning, I played badminton, there, I made my friends to not be comfortable around me, maybe because I talked too little. Then, we all together went to canteen, I only played handphone by my own, my friends were communicating to one other, this made me to not look interested. But that's not quite right, I want to communicate with my friends, but I don't have self confidence. I know that I am so stupid, I am so regretful.

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我觉得今天和朋友沟通不好。

我要告诉你今天发现的事。

我早上去打了羽毛球在那儿,我让我的朋友在我周围舒服,也许因为我说得不多没怎么说话

I feel that today my communication with my friends is bad. I want to tell you about what is happening today. In the morning, I played badminton, there, I made my friends to not be comfortable around me, maybe because I talked too little. Then, we all together went to canteen, I only played handphone by my own, my friends were communicating to one other, this made me to not look interested. But that's not quite right, I want to communicate with my friends, but I don't have self confidence. I know that I am so stupid, I am so regretful.

然后,我们一起去了食堂,我自己玩手机,我的朋友都在互相沟通交流,这让我看起来对他们不感兴趣。

可是那对的,我想跟朋友沟通,但是我没有自信。

我知道我很笨,我很后悔。

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Jevon

Jan. 26, 2025

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谢谢!

我觉得今天和朋友沟通不好。

我要告诉你今天发了的事。

我早上去打了羽毛球,在那儿,我让我的朋友在我周围感到不舒服,也许因为我说得不多。

然后,我们一起去了食堂,我自己只玩手机,我的朋友都在互相沟通,这让我看起来不感兴趣。

可是那不是对的,我想跟朋友沟通,但是我没有自信。

我知道我很笨,我很后悔。

DAY 4


我觉得今天和朋友沟通不好。


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我觉得今天和朋友沟通不好。

我要告诉你今天发现了的事。


我要告诉你今天发了的事。

我要告诉你今天发现的事。

我早上去打了羽毛球,在那儿,我让我的朋友在我周围不舒服,也许因为我说得不多。


我早上去打了羽毛球,在那儿,我让我的朋友在我周围感到不舒服,也许因为我说得不多。

我早上去打了羽毛球在那儿,我让我的朋友在我周围舒服,也许因为我说得不多没怎么说话

I feel that today my communication with my friends is bad. I want to tell you about what is happening today. In the morning, I played badminton, there, I made my friends to not be comfortable around me, maybe because I talked too little. Then, we all together went to canteen, I only played handphone by my own, my friends were communicating to one other, this made me to not look interested. But that's not quite right, I want to communicate with my friends, but I don't have self confidence. I know that I am so stupid, I am so regretful.

然后,我们一起去了食堂,我自己只玩手机,我的朋友都在互相沟通,这让我看起来不感兴趣。


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然后,我们一起去了食堂,我自己玩手机,我的朋友都在互相沟通交流,这让我看起来对他们不感兴趣。

可是那不是对的,我想跟朋友沟通,但是我没有自信。


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可是那对的,我想跟朋友沟通,但是我没有自信。

我知道我很笨,我很后悔。


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