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Feb. 15, 2023

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Day 39: Bullet Journaling

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has became into a habit. I complete two task a day at least. I think that this is my fourth bujo. I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too much tasks for one day and also because I used to have many trackers. I think that the key to become bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

Today was Valentine's day in my country. I didn't do something interesting today. So, I'm just going to share some of my poems. I wrote these two haiku when I was in love with a girl some years ago. I wrote them when I was just starting to write haiku, so they could be bad (haha). I wrote them in spanish and these ares the translations.

The winter wind
hears what I feel for you
will it tell you?

Shiny day of spring
the sunlight reflects on your eyes
I fell in love with you!

There's a song called "Jueves" by La Oreja de Van Gogh. The song is about a girl who takes a subway line when she goes to her school, hoping to meet a boy that she likes. The boy also takes the same line instead of taking the direct line to his destination. One day they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunel, the metro explodes. The song was inspired in true events. The last lines of the song says:
I find your face
I get brave and kiss your lips
You say to me that you love me
And I give you the last heartbeat of my heart.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics is so good and sad.
Thanks for reading!

Corrections

Day 39: Bullet Journaling

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

やった!

また、

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has been made into a habit.

I complete at least two tasks a day at least.

I think that this is my fourth bujo.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day and also because I used to have many trackers.

I think that the key to becomemaking bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just starting with a to-do list for example.

また、

I think that the key to turning bullet journaling into a habit is to start easy, just starting with a to-do list for example.

Today was Valentine's dDay in my country.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

例えば、

- I didn't do anything.
- I did nothing.

So, I'm just going to share some of my poems.

I wrote these two haiku when I was in love with a girl some years ago.

I wrote them when I was just starting to write haiku, so they could be bad (haha).

I wrote them in sSpanish and tso hesre ares the translations.

The winter wind

hears what I feel for you

will it tell you?

Shiny day of spring

the sunlight reflects on your eyes

正しいですがこれが他の書き方です。

- the sunlight reflects upon your eyes
- the sunlight reflects in your eyes

I fell in love with you!

There's a song called "Jueves" by La Oreja de Van Gogh.

The song is about a girl who takes a subway line when sheto goes to her school, hoping to meet a boy that she likes.

また、

The song is about a girl who takes a subway line to go to school, hoping to meet a boy whom she likes.

The boy also takes the same line instead of taking the direct line to his destination.

One day they start to talk but when the mMetro enters a tunnel, the mMetro explodes.

へー!

The song was inspired inby true events.

The last lines of the song says:

verb agreement

I find your face

I get brave and kiss your lips

You say to me that you love me

And I give you the last heartbeat of my heart.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

verb agreement again

Thanks for reading!

Feedback

わー、きれいですよ!Fernanhaikuの詩が好きです。教えてくれてありがとうございました。上手に書けています!

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I complete at least two task a day at least.

I think that this is my fourth bujo.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day, and also because I used to have many trackers.

I think that the key to becometurn bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

Today was Valentine's day in my country.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

So, I'm just going to share some of my poems.

I wrote these two haiku when I was in love with a girl some years ago.

I wrote them when I was just starting to write haiku, so they could be bad (haha).

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

The winter wind

hears what I feel for you

will it tell you?

Shiny day of spring

the sunlight reflects on your eyes

I fell in love with you!

There's a song called "Jueves" by La Oreja de Van Gogh.

The song is about a girl who takes a subway line when she goes to her school, hoping to meet a boy that she likes.

The boy also takes the same line instead of taking the direct line to his destination.

One day they start to talk, but when the metro enters a tunnel, the metro explodes.

The song was inspired inby true events.

The last lines of the song says:

I find your face

I get brave and kiss your lips

You say to me that you love me

And I give you the last heartbeat of my heart.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

Thanks for reading!

Feedback

Very good! Love is a beautiful thing.

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I complete two tasks a day at least.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day and also because I used to have many trackers.

I think that the key to becometurn bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

One day they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunnel, the metro explodes.

The song was inspired inby true events.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

Day 39: Bullet Journaling

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I complete two tasks a day at least.

I think that this is my fourth bujo.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day, and also because I used to have many trackers.

I think that the key to becometurn bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

Today was Valentine's dDay in my country.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

So, I'm just going to share some of my poems.

I wrote these two haiku when I was in love with a girl somea few years ago.

I wrote them when I was just starting to write haiku, so they could be bad (haha).

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

The winter wind

hears what I feel for you

will it tell you?

Shiny days of spring

the sunlight reflects oin your eyes

I feall in love with you!

There's a song called "Jueves" by La Oreja de Van Gogh.

The song is about a girl who takes a subway line when she goes to her school, hoping to meet a boy that she likes.

The boy also takes the same line instead of taking the direct line to his destination.

One day, they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunnel, the metro explodes.

The song was inspired inby true events.

The last lines of the song saysare:

I find your face

I get brave and kiss your lips

You say to me that you love me

And I give you the last heartbeat of my heart.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

Thanks for reading!

Feedback

Very well done! I think you did a fine job translating your poems and they were lovely. The song you shared was also lovely. And good job with keeping up with your bullet journal, it must feel good being able to mark off your tasks!

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I complete at least two tasks a day at least.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day and also because I used to have too many trackers.

I think that the key to becomhave bullet journaling intobecome a habit, it'ss just to start easy, just withoff with something easy, like a to-do list for example.

I know your intention so I reworded the end to make it unnecessary to have "for example". Whenever I think of "For example" it cannot really be used well at the end of the sentence.

Today was Valentine's dDay in my country.

Capitalized "Day" as it is a whole construction. Like: "April Fool's Day".

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

The song is about a girl who takes athe subway line when she goes to herto school, hoping to meet athe boy that she likes.

I do not understand the context, but is she taking the subway to meet the boy she sees sometimes? I really cannot correct it if I do not know, but I corrected it as if she takes the subway to meet a specific boy.

The boy also takes the same line, instead of taking thea direct line, to his destinationakes the same one as her.

My rewriting is not perfect, but I do not have a lot of context to work with.

One day they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunel, the metro explodes.???

I cannot understand this because there is not enough context. Were they on a train? Were they in the station? Have they been meeting each other many times over and just now begin to talk or is this their first meeting?

The song was inspired inby true events.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

This implies you like the lyrics because they are sad. If you do not mean this you want to say "...the lyrics are so good, but sad."

Day 39: Bullet Journaling


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I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has became into a habit.


I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has becaome into a habit.

やった! また、 I've noticed that planning my days in my bujo (bullet journal) has been made into a habit.

I complete two task a day at least.


I complete at least two tasks a day at least.

I complete two tasks a day at least.

I complete two tasks a day at least.

I complete at least two task a day at least.

I complete at least two tasks a day at least.

I think that this is my fourth bujo.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too much tasks for one day and also because I used to have many trackers.


I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day and also because I used to have too many trackers.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day, and also because I used to have many trackers.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day and also because I used to have many trackers.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day, and also because I used to have many trackers.

I failed with my past bujos because I used to set too muchany tasks for one day and also because I used to have many trackers.

I think that the key to become bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.


I think that the key to becomhave bullet journaling intobecome a habit, it'ss just to start easy, just withoff with something easy, like a to-do list for example.

I know your intention so I reworded the end to make it unnecessary to have "for example". Whenever I think of "For example" it cannot really be used well at the end of the sentence.

I think that the key to becometurn bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

I think that the key to becometurn bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

I think that the key to becometurn bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just with a to-do list for example.

I think that the key to becomemaking bullet journaling into a habit, it's to start easy, just starting with a to-do list for example.

また、 I think that the key to turning bullet journaling into a habit is to start easy, just starting with a to-do list for example.

Today was Valentine's day in my country.


Today was Valentine's dDay in my country.

Capitalized "Day" as it is a whole construction. Like: "April Fool's Day".

Today was Valentine's dDay in my country.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today was Valentine's dDay in my country.

I didn't do something interesting today.


I didn't do someanything interesting today.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

I didn't do someanything interesting today.

例えば、 - I didn't do anything. - I did nothing.

So, I'm just going to share some of my poems.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wrote these two haiku when I was in love with a girl some years ago.


I wrote these two haiku when I was in love with a girl somea few years ago.

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I wrote them when I was just starting to write haiku, so they could be bad (haha).


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I wrote them in spanish and this is the translation.


The winter wind


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hears what I feel for you


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will it tell you?


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Shiny day of spring


Shiny days of spring

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the sunlight reflects on your eyes


the sunlight reflects oin your eyes

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the sunlight reflects on your eyes

正しいですがこれが他の書き方です。 - the sunlight reflects upon your eyes - the sunlight reflects in your eyes

I fell in love with you!


I feall in love with you!

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I think that I could rewrite the second one to:


Shiny day of spring


The sun is high in the sky


A fresh breeze blowing


When I saw your eyes


Shining with the sunlight


My heart started aching


There's a song called "Jueves" by La Oreja de Van Gogh.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The song is about a girl who takes a subway line when she goes to her school, hoping to meet a boy that she likes.


The song is about a girl who takes athe subway line when she goes to herto school, hoping to meet athe boy that she likes.

I do not understand the context, but is she taking the subway to meet the boy she sees sometimes? I really cannot correct it if I do not know, but I corrected it as if she takes the subway to meet a specific boy.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The song is about a girl who takes a subway line when sheto goes to her school, hoping to meet a boy that she likes.

また、 The song is about a girl who takes a subway line to go to school, hoping to meet a boy whom she likes.

The boy also takes the same line instead of taking the direct line to his destination.


The boy also takes the same line, instead of taking thea direct line, to his destinationakes the same one as her.

My rewriting is not perfect, but I do not have a lot of context to work with.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One day they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunel, the metro explodes.


One day they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunel, the metro explodes.???

I cannot understand this because there is not enough context. Were they on a train? Were they in the station? Have they been meeting each other many times over and just now begin to talk or is this their first meeting?

One day, they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunnel, the metro explodes.

One day they start to talk but when the metro enters a tunnel, the metro explodes.

One day they start to talk, but when the metro enters a tunnel, the metro explodes.

One day they start to talk but when the mMetro enters a tunnel, the mMetro explodes.

へー!

The song was inspired in true events.


The song was inspired inby true events.

The song was inspired inby true events.

The song was inspired inby true events.

The song was inspired inby true events.

The song was inspired inby true events.

The last lines of the song says:


The last lines of the song saysare:

The last lines of the song says:

The last lines of the song says:

verb agreement

I find your face


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I get brave and kiss your lips


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You say to me that you love me


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And I give you the last heartbeat of my heart.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics is so good and sad.


I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

This implies you like the lyrics because they are sad. If you do not mean this you want to say "...the lyrics are so good, but sad."

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

I prefer listening to the cover version, but the lyrics isare so good and sad.

verb agreement again

Thanks for reading!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I wrote them in spanish and these ares the translations.


I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

I wrote them in sSpanish and these ares the translations.

I wrote them in sSpanish and tso hesre ares the translations.

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