Dec. 17, 2024
Day 39
A slower pace of life has significant benefits in both sides include work and relationship. First, the slowness will improve the work efficiency. We can improve our work results if we take some time to double check our goals and direction, to see if we miss any important points.
Furthermore, a slower pace of life may also enrich our relationship. If we just looking toward our goals, we may ignore other relationships. Thanks to a slow lifestyle, we may have more time to look around and improve our relationships.
Lối sống chậm có tác động tích cực đến chúng ta cả trong cả hai phương diện công việc và các mối quan hệ. Đầu tiên, sự chậm rãi cải thiện hiệu quả trong công việc. Bạn có thể nâng cao thành tích làm việc nếu dành một chút thời gian để xác nhận lại các mục tiêu và phương hướng, nhằm kiểm tra xem liệu bạn có đang bỏ sót điểm quan trọng nào không.
Thêm nữa, lối sống chậm cũng làm phong phú thêm các mối quan hệ với người khác. Nếu bạn chỉ nhìn về phía trước và hướng đến mục tiêu, bạn dễ có xu hướng lơ là các mối quan hệ giữa con người với nhau. nhưng nhờ có lối sống chậm, bạn có thời gian để nhìn lại những người xung quanh mình, từ đó có thể cải thiện các mối quan hệ với người khác.
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Dec. 18, 2024
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Day 39
A slower pace of life has significant benefits in both sides include work and relationships.
"in both sides" is confusing because we (the reader) can't understand what those two sides are
First, the slowness will improve the work efficiency.
We can improve our work results if we take some time to double check our goals and direction, and to see if we missed any important points.
Furthermore, a slower pace of life may also enrich our relationship.s.
If we just looking toward our goals, we may ignore other relationships.
Needs some more details for clarity. Maybe something like:
If we just look toward our goals, only focusing on relationships that help achieve those goals, we might overlook and miss out on other valuable relationships.
Is this what you mean?
Thanks to a slow lifestyle, we may have more time to look around and improve our relationships.
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I agree a slower pace of life is important! With the rise of the internet and globalization, everything moves so quickly these days.
Dec. 18, 2024
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A slower pace of life has significant benefits in both sides include work and relationship. A slower pace of life has significant benefits in both "in both sides" is confusing because we (the reader) can't understand what those two sides are A slower pace |
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First, the slowness will improve the work efficiency. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Firstly, t |
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We can improve our work results if we take some time to double check our goals and direction, to see if we miss any important points. We can improve our work results if we take some time to double check our goals and direction We can improve our work results if we take some time to |
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Furthermore, a slower pace of life may also enrich our relationship. Furthermore, a slower pace of life may also enrich our relationship Furthermore, a slower pace |
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If we just looking toward our goals, we may ignore other relationships. If we just look Needs some more details for clarity. Maybe something like: If we just look toward our goals, only focusing on relationships that help achieve those goals, we might overlook and miss out on other valuable relationships. Is this what you mean? If we are just |
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