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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 14, 2023

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Day 38: Small business

My sister and I are thinking about starting a small business. We are just still purposing some ideas. I would like to start a small brand and build it up. Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun and for the knowledge what we could get from it. Some of my options for studying in University were marketing and international bussines as I am really into them. We haven't started yet, as I say, we are just planning, so anything that we have proposed is oficial. One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts. I have a good excuse to start learning about marketing, don't you think?
Thanks for reading!!

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Day 38: Small bBusiness

My sister and I are thinking about starting a small business.

We are just still purposingworking on some ideas.

頑張ってください!

I would like to start a small brand and build it up.

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun and for the knowledge of what we could get from it.

頭がいいですよ。

Some of my options for studying inat University were marketing and international bussiness as I am really into them.

いいですね。

We haven't started yet, as I say, wid. We are just planning, so anything that we have proposed isn't official.

また、

We haven't started yet as I said. We are just in the planning stages, so anything that we have proposed isn't official.

One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts.

美味しそう!

I have a good excuse to start learning about marketing, don't you think?

Thanks for reading!!

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楽しそうです!上手に書けています!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 15, 2023

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でしょう, Thanks for your corrections

My sister and I are thinking about starting a small business.

We are just still purposing somethinking of ideas.

I would like to start a small brand and build it up.

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun, and for the knowledge what we could get from it.

We haven't started yet, and as I sayid, we are just planning, so anything that we have proposed is official.

One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts.

I have a good excuse to start learning about marketing, don't you think?

Thanks for reading!!

Feedback

Good!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 15, 2023

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Thank you!

Day 38: Small bBusiness

My sister and I are thinking about starting a small business.

We are just still just purposing some ideas.

I would like to start a small brand and build it up.

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun, and for the knowledge what we coulde might get from it.

Some of my options for studying in University weare marketing and international bussiness, as I am really into them.

We haven't started yet, as I say, wid. We are just planning, so anything that we have proposed isn't official.

One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts.

I have a good excuse to start learning about marketing, don't you think?

Thanks for reading!!

Feedback

Good job! Starting a business is something that would take a lot of hard work, and could be really competitive depending on where you set it up. Learning to market would help with that, I think. Good luck with whatever happens!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 15, 2023

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Yes, It's going to be hard, but I will try. Thank you for the advice!!! I'm going to learn more about to market. Thanks for your corrections!!!

Day 38: Small business

My sister and I are thinking about starting a small business.

We are just still purposexploring some ideas.

I would like to start with a small brand and build it up.

Maybe we won't get toovery far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun and for the knowledgeto learn what we could get from it.

Some of my options for studying in University were marketing and international bussiness as I am really into them.

We haven't started as yet, and as I sayid, we are just planning, so aneverything that we have proposed is oficial.explored ( any ideas we have) is still in the early stages.

One of those ideas is for the business is selling desserts.

I have a good excuse to start learning about marketing, don't you think?

Thanks for reading!!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 14, 2023

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Thank you!

Day 38: Small business


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Day 38: Small bBusiness

Day 38: Small bBusiness

My sister and I are thinking about starting a small business.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We are just still purposing some ideas.


We are just still purposexploring some ideas.

We are just still just purposing some ideas.

We are just still purposing somethinking of ideas.

We are just still purposingworking on some ideas.

頑張ってください!

I would like to start a small brand and build it up.


I would like to start with a small brand and build it up.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun and for the knowledge what we could get from it.


Maybe we won't get toovery far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun and for the knowledgeto learn what we could get from it.

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun, and for the knowledge what we coulde might get from it.

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun, and for the knowledge what we could get from it.

Maybe we won't get too far, but I want to start a small brand just for fun and for the knowledge of what we could get from it.

頭がいいですよ。

Some of my options for studying in University were marketing and international bussines as I am really into them.


Some of my options for studying in University were marketing and international bussiness as I am really into them.

Some of my options for studying in University weare marketing and international bussiness, as I am really into them.

Some of my options for studying inat University were marketing and international bussiness as I am really into them.

いいですね。

We haven't started yet, as I say, we are just planning, so anything that he have proposed is oficial.


One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts.


One of those ideas is for the business is selling desserts.

One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One of those ideas for the business is selling desserts.

美味しそう!

I have a good excuse to start learning about marketing, don't you think?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for reading!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We haven't started yet, as I say, we are just planning, so anything that we have proposed is oficial.


We haven't started as yet, and as I sayid, we are just planning, so aneverything that we have proposed is oficial.explored ( any ideas we have) is still in the early stages.

We haven't started yet, as I say, wid. We are just planning, so anything that we have proposed isn't official.

We haven't started yet, and as I sayid, we are just planning, so anything that we have proposed is official.

We haven't started yet, as I say, wid. We are just planning, so anything that we have proposed isn't official.

また、 We haven't started yet as I said. We are just in the planning stages, so anything that we have proposed isn't official.

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