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Day 36: Reward yourself

I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal. We learn and improve like any other animal because, after all, we are animals, too. For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make a positive reinforcement when it achieve to sit down.
You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after have completed your daily habit. We need to reward ourselves after every time we finish a goal. However, after doing it for a time, we won't need to reward ourselves every time and just do it occasionally. I don't know what can I use as a reward, I'm still looking for it. I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine. Though, I don't like eating too much sweeties. I love listening to music so I think I can use it. I love watching TV series, anime and play some videogames, so they're other options. In my adolescence I had learned that it's ok do not be perfect and that I can improve, I can be better. Everyone can improve and be better. Today was my last day being eighteen, I'm glad that I have learnt some good things the last three years.
Thanks for reading.


Here is the link of the article if you wanna read it.

https://nesslabs.com/self-motivation?ref=refind

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We learn and improve like any other animal because, after all, we are animals, too.

I love listening to music so I think I can use it.

Everyone can improve and be better.

Thanks for reading.

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Feb. 13, 2023

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Day 36: Reward yourself

Everyone can improve and be better.

Thanks for reading.

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I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.

We learn and improve like any other animal because, after all, we are animals, too.

Everyone can improve and be better.

Thanks for reading.

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Fernanhaiku

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I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.

We learn and improve like any other animal because, after all, we are animals, too.

Everyone can improve and be better.

Thanks for reading.

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Fernanhaiku

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I love watching TV series, anime and play some videogames, so they're other options.


I love watching TV series, and anime and play someing video games, so they'rose are some other options. I love watching TV series and anime and playing video games, so those are some other options.

I love watching TV series, anime and play someing videogames, so they're other options. I love watching TV series, anime and playing videogames, so they're other options.

I love watching TV series, anime and play someing videogames, so they're other options. I love watching TV series, anime and playing videogames, so they're other options.

igual que antes.

I love watching TV series, anime and play someing videogames, so they're other options. I love watching TV series, anime and playing videogames, so they're other options.

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I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.


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I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal. I read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.

"I have read" in English is like "I have had the experience of ...", more or less. * I have seen that move * I have read ten books in a week * I have climbed a mountain But "I read" = "this thing happened", only. It's just saying that you read it. "I read ten books in a week" = just that, it's a fact. Does that make sense? It's a very subtle point, but your English is so good, maybe it will make sense. :-P

I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal. I read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.

We learn and improve like any other animal because, after all, we are animals, too.


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For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make a positive reinforcement when it achieved to sit down.


You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after completed your daily habit.


We need to reward ourselves after every time we finish a goal.


We need to reward ourselves after every time we finishachieve a goal. We need to reward ourselves every time we achieve a goal.

Goals are achieved or accomplished, not finished.

We need to reward ourselves after every time we finish a goal. We need to reward ourselves every time we finish a goal.

We need to reward ourselves after every time we finish a goal. We need to reward ourselves every time we finish a goal.

We need to reward ourselves after every time we finish a goal. We need to reward ourselves every time we finish a goal.

面白そうです。初めて聞きました。

However, after doing it for a time, we won't need to reward ourselves every time and just do it occasionally.


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* no estuve seguro a que refería cuando dijiste " and just do it " -- "it" aquí es la tarea, o el premio? :-)

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I don't know what can I use as a reward, I'm still looking for it.


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I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine.


I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routines. I have heard about people who eat chocolate after completing their work out routines.

I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine. I have heard about people who eat chocolate after completing their workout routine.

I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine. I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their workout.

"workout" o "exercise routine". No creo que haya oído "workout routine", pero tal vez esté bien. :-)

I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine. I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their workout routine.

Though, I don't like eating too much sweeties.


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Though, I don't like eating too muchany sweeties. Though, I don't like eating too many sweets.

Though, I don't like eating too muchany sweeties. Though, I don't like eating too many sweets.

"Sweeties" = el plural de "sweetie", lo cual significa "cariño" o "mi amor" en inglés. "What's that, sweetie?" = "Como, mi amor?"

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I love listening to music so I think I van use it.


In my adolescence I had learned that it's ok do not be perfect and that I can improve, I can be better.


In my adolescence, I had learned that it's ok dto not be perfect and that I can improve,; I can be better. In my adolescence, I learned that it's ok to not be perfect and that I can improve; I can be better.

In my adolescence, I had learned that it's ok day to not be perfect and that if I can improve, I can be better. In my adolescence, I learned that it's okay to not be perfect and that if I can improve, I can be better.

In my adolescence I had learned that it's ok dto not be perfect and that I can improve, I can be better. In my adolescence I learned that it's ok to not be perfect and that I can improve, I can be better.

"In my adolescence" suena muy formal, pero es bueno. "When I was a kid" sirve también.

In my adolescence I had learned that it's ok day to not be perfect and thatbecause I can improve,. I can be better. In my adolescence I had learned that it's okay to not be perfect because I can improve. I can be better.

そうですよね!

Everyone can improve and be better.


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Today is my last day being eighteen, I'm glad that I have learnt some good things the last three years.


Thanks for reading.


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For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make a positive reinforcement when it achieve to sit down.


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For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make a positive reinforcement when it achieve to sits down. For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with treats in order to make a positive reinforcement when it sits down.

* "food treats" = ??? :-) "edible treats" is ok. But perhaps "treats" is best. * "achieve to " is not used. "Achieve" isn't used often, actually. :-)

For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make acreate positive reinforcement when it achieve to sit down. For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to create positive reinforcement.

You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after have completed your daily habit.


You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project, or you can listen to your favorite song after haveing completed your daily habitto-dos. You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project, or you can listen to your favorite song after having completed your daily to-dos.

You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project, or you can listen to your favorite song after haveing completed your daily habit. You can hangout with your friends after finishing a big project, or you can listen to your favorite song after having completed your daily habit.

You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after have completeding your daily habit. You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after completing your daily habit.

"after finishing" es el gerundio, entonces debes usar "after completing" por la concordancia. :-) En lugar de eso, también puedes decir "after you have completed" y "after you've completed".

You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after haveing completed your daily habit. You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after having completed your daily habit.

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I love listening to music so I think I can use it.


I love listening to music, so I think I can use ithat as my reward. I love listening to music, so I think I can use that as my reward.

I love listening to music, so I think I can use ithat. I love listening to music, so I think I can use that.

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Today was my last day being eighteen, I'm glad that I have learnt some good things the last three years.


Today was my last day being eighteen,. I'm glad that I have learnt some good things the last three years. Today was my last day being eighteen. I'm glad that I have learnt some good things the last three years.

Today wais my last day being eighteen,. I'm glad that I have learnt some good things in the last three years. Today is my last day being eighteen. I'm glad that I have learnt good things in the last three years.

Today was my last day being eighteen, I'm glad that I have learnted some good things the last three years. Today was my last day being eighteen, I'm glad that I have learned some good things the last three years.

Creo que también se usa "learnt" ... :-P

Today was my last day of being eighteen,. I'm glad that I have learnt some good things in the last three years. Today was my last day of being eighteen. I'm glad that I have learnt some good things in the last three years.

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