Day 36: Reward yYourself

I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.

For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make acreate positive reinforcement when it achieve to sit down.

You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after haveing completed your daily habit.

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We need to reward ourselves after every time we finish a goal.

面白そうです。初めて聞きました。

However, aAfter doing it for a timewhile, however, we won't need to reward ourselves everyach time andbecause we will just do it occasionnaturally.

I don't know what I can I use as a reward,. I'm still looking for it.

I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine.

Though, I don't like eating too muchany sweetiess, though.

I love watching TV series, anime and play someing videogames, so they're other options.

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In my adolescence I had learned that it's ok day to not be perfect and thatbecause I can improve,. I can be better.

そうですよね！

Today was my last day of being eighteen,. I'm glad that I have learnt some good things in the last three years.

I've read an article about the importance of rewarding ourselves when we accomplish a goal.

"I have read" in English is like "I have had the experience of ...", more or less.

* I have seen that move
* I have read ten books in a week
* I have climbed a mountain

But "I read" = "this thing happened", only. It's just saying that you read it. "I read ten books in a week" = just that, it's a fact.

Does that make sense? It's a very subtle point, but your English is so good, maybe it will make sense. :-P

For example, when you try to train a dog to sit down, you need to reward it with food treats in order to make a positive reinforcement when it achieve to sits down.

* "food treats" = ??? :-) "edible treats" is ok. But perhaps "treats" is best.
* "achieve to " is not used. "Achieve" isn't used often, actually. :-)

You can hang out with your friends after finishing a big project or you can listen to your favorite song after have completeding your daily habit.

"after finishing" es el gerundio, entonces debes usar "after completing" por la concordancia. :-) En lugar de eso, también puedes decir "after you have completed" y "after you've completed".

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* no estuve seguro a que refería cuando dijiste " and just do it " -- "it" aquí es la tarea, o el premio? :-)

I have heard about people who eat a chocolate after completing their work out routine.

"workout" o "exercise routine". No creo que haya oído "workout routine", pero tal vez esté bien. :-)

Though, I don't like eating too muchany sweeties.

"Sweeties" = el plural de "sweetie", lo cual significa "cariño" o "mi amor" en inglés. "What's that, sweetie?" = "Como, mi amor?"

I love watching TV series, anime and play someing videogames, so they're other options.

igual que antes.

In my adolescence I had learned that it's ok dto not be perfect and that I can improve, I can be better.

"In my adolescence" suena muy formal, pero es bueno. "When I was a kid" sirve también.

Today was my last day being eighteen, I'm glad that I have learnted some good things the last three years.

Creo que también se usa "learnt" ... :-P

Day 36: Reward yYourself

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