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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 15, 2024

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Day 37

In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority into setting up some support center and help them to blend with the society. Normally, recluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely. Therefore, we need to lead and give them more chances to hang out. However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them and step by step changes. If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious. The comfort and wanting to communicate or being treated by themselves are also important.


Để giải quyết vấn đề cô đơn ẩn dật, trước tiên phải thiết lập trung tâm hỗ trợ và giúp họ thích ứng với xã hội thông qua tư vấn. Thông thường, những người cô đơn ẩn dật thường chỉ sống trong nhà hoặc trường hợp ra ngoài rất ngắn. Vì vậy, cần phải dẫn dắt và cung cấp cơ hội để những người này có thể thường xuyên ra ngoài. Nhưng điều quan trọng nhất là nhìn họ bằng ánh mắt ấm áp và chờ để thay đổi từ từ. Nếu chúng ta cố gắng thay đổi thông qua sự ép buộc thì kết quả trái ngược xảy ra hoặc triệu chứng có thể nghiêm trọng hơn. Điều quan trọng là có sự thoải mái xung quanh và làm cho họ muốn tự mình giao tiếp hoặc điều trị.

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Day 37

In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority intorioritize setting up some support center and help themrecluses to blend with the society.

Normally, rRecluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely.

Many people choose either "normally" or "usually," and generally do not use both in one description.

Therefore, we need to lead and give them more chances to hang out.

However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them ands are to treat them warmly and to encourage step -by -step changes.

If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.

Their comfort and wantingdesire to communicate or beingget treated by themselves are also important.

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 16, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.

In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority into setting up somea support center and help them to blend with in withe society.

Normally, recluses usually live in their own houses orand go outside rarely.

Therefore, we need to lead and givthem and provide them with more chances to hang outgo outside.

Give is fine too !

However, the most important thing is to give them warm eyes for(?) and guide them and step by step changes.

If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.

The comfort and, wanting to communicate, or being treated bytreating themselves areis also important.

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 16, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.

Day 36


In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority into setting up some support center and help them to blend with the society.


In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority into setting up somea support center and help them to blend with in withe society.

In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority intorioritize setting up some support center and help themrecluses to blend with the society.

Normally, recluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely.


Normally, recluses usually live in their own houses orand go outside rarely.

Normally, rRecluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely.

Many people choose either "normally" or "usually," and generally do not use both in one description.

Therefore, we need to lead and give them more chances to hang out.


Therefore, we need to lead and givthem and provide them with more chances to hang outgo outside.

Give is fine too !

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them and step by step changes.


However, the most important thing is to give them warm eyes for(?) and guide them and step by step changes.

However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them ands are to treat them warmly and to encourage step -by -step changes.

If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.


If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The comfort and wanting to communicate or being treated by themselves are also important.


The comfort and, wanting to communicate, or being treated bytreating themselves areis also important.

Their comfort and wantingdesire to communicate or beingget treated by themselves are also important.

Day 37


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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