Dec. 14, 2024
Day 36
Recluses have struggles in joining social activities, if they keep living alone, their daily lives may become more difficult. If they continue to live alone in a long time, decline to communicate and other relationships, they may suffer from mental illness such as depression and risks of turning into anti-social behaviors may happen. Cruel crimes that have been occurred in our society recently may be because of the long-term reclusive life.
Người cô đơn ẩn dật khó hoạt động xã hội nên nếu cứ tiếp tục bỏ mặc thì cuộc sống hàng ngày sẽ trở nên khó khăn hơn. Nếu cứ tiếp tục cuộc sống ẩn dật trong một thời gian dài, từ chối giao tiếp và cắt đứt các mối quan hệ với người khác, sẽ gặp các bệnh về thần kinh như trầm cảm và nguy cơ chuyển sang các hành vi gây hại cho xã hội ngày càng lớn. Những tội ác hung tàn đang diễn ra trong xã hội gần đây có thể từ nguyên nhân do cuộc sống ẩn dật trong một thời gian dài.
Day 36
Recluses have struggles in joining social activities, if they keep living alone, their daily lives may become more difficult.
If they continue to live alone in a long time, decline to communicate and maintain other relationships, they may suffer from mental illness such as depression and risks of turnengaging into anti-social behaviors may happen.
Cruel crimes that have been occurred in our society recently may be because of the long-term reclusive life.
"have been occurring" would also be acceptable.
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Complex ideas, well done.
Dec. 15, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Day 36
Recluses have struggles in joining social activities, and if they keep living alone, their daily lives may become more difficult.
If you don't have 'and', it sounds like two separate sentences. Therefore, you would either need a period (.) or some kind of word to continue the sentence and combine it into one.
If they continue to live alone in athe long time,erm, and decline to communicate and form other relationships, they may suffer from mental illness such as depression, and risks of turning into developing anti-social behaviors may happen.
Cruel crimes that have been occurrcommitted in our society recently may be because of thea long-term reclusive life.
Dec. 15, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
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Recluses have struggles in joining social activities, if they keep living alone, their daily lives may become more difficult. Recluses have struggles in joining social activities, and if they keep living alone, their daily lives may become more difficult. If you don't have 'and', it sounds like two separate sentences. Therefore, you would either need a period (.) or some kind of word to continue the sentence and combine it into one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If they continue to live alone in a long time, decline to communicate and other relationships, they may suffer from mental illness such as depression and risks of turning into anti-social behaviors may happen. If they continue to live alone in If they continue to live alone |
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Cruel crimes that have been occurred in our society recently may be because of the long-term reclusive life. Cruel crimes that have been Cruel crimes that have "have been occurring" would also be acceptable. |
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