Dec. 13, 2024
Day 35
Reclusive loneliness may come from different factors such as personal respective, family, school or society. The informationized society, which decrease the interpersonal relationship due to the rapid development of the digital society and social media, also increase the reclusive loneliness. Moreover, beside the strict competitions, isolation, psychological narrowing and insensitive society may be also considered as reasons.
Sự cô đơn ẩn dật xuất hiện từ nhiều yếu tố khác nhau như khuynh hướng cá nhân, gia đình, trường học và môi trường xã hội. Xã hội thông tin hóa, việc tiếp xúc giữa các cá nhân bị giảm do sự phát triển nhanh chóng của công nghệ kỹ thuật số và truyền thông, cũng đang thúc đẩy sự gia tăng của sự cô lập ẩn dật. Ngoài ra, trong sự cạnh tranh khốc liệt thì sự cô lập, thu hẹp tâm lý và sự thờ ơ của xã hội cũng được coi là nguyên nhân.
Reclusive loneliness may come from different factors, such as personal perespective, family, school, or society.
I don't know what "personal respective" is, did you mean "personal perspective"?
The informationdigitalized society, which decrease thes interpersonal relationships due to the rapid development of the digital society and social media, also increase thes reclusive loneliness.
"informationized" is not a word. You could say: "information-driven", or "digitalized "to express your point.
Moreover, beside the strict competitions, isolation, psychological narrowing, and an insensitive society may be also be considered as reasons.
What do you mean by "strict competitions"? Since you say "moreover, besides..." you should mention something you already said. For example: "Moreover, beside the digitalized society, isolation, psychological narrowing, and an insensitive society may also be considered as reasons."
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Very good job! Your vocabulary is very advanced.
Keep up the good work :)
Dec. 14, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
About "strict competition", I mean people in society nowadays have to be competitive more and more in various areas such as personal perspective, or within a company, or between companies. I want to use a word to describe these situations. Would you mind giving me some advice/suggestions?
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Reclusive loneliness may come from different factors such as personal respective, family, school or society. Reclusive loneliness may come from different factors, such as personal per I don't know what "personal respective" is, did you mean "personal perspective"? |
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The informationized society, which decrease the interpersonal relationship due to the rapid development of the digital society and social media, also increase the reclusive loneliness. The "informationized" is not a word. You could say: "information-driven", or "digitalized "to express your point. |
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Moreover, beside the strict competitions, isolation, psychological narrowing and insensitive society may be also considered as reasons. Moreover, beside the strict competitions, isolation, psychological narrowing, and an insensitive society may What do you mean by "strict competitions"? Since you say "moreover, besides..." you should mention something you already said. For example: "Moreover, beside the digitalized society, isolation, psychological narrowing, and an insensitive society may also be considered as reasons." |
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