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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 12, 2024

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Day 34

A leader is a person who can lead members in the organization to achieve a common goal. Therefore, we can say that a leader plays a very important role in deciding the success as well the failure of the organization. So what defines a true leader?
I assume that the conditions for a leader are leadership skills and promotion skills. First, leadership skills include abilities that guide and encourage a group of people toward achieving set of goals. To do this, they need to manage people well, try their best to find talents, and develop their abilities. They also need to decide the suitable positions for each person and encourage them to play that role well. Second, promotion skills include strengths that to push work effectively toward the goals. As a result, a leader when lead work need to have outstanding abilities and clear direction. Moreover, a leader also needs to be humble, ethical, and responsible. However, there are some points that we need to consider. A true leader really need to be aware of own judgments in leading the organization. Therefore, they should be able to have empathy and communication skills when receiving opinions of other members and then give a direction.
Finally, I have summarized the roles, conditions and points to keep in mind of a leader. In order to be a good leader, they need to have leadership skills, pushing and leading the organization, respect the opinions and characteristics of the organization’s members, as well the effort to empathize and communicate.


Một nhà lãnh đạo là một người có thể dẫn dắt các thành viên của tổ chức để thực hiện mục tiêu chung của tổ chức. Vì vậy, có thể nói rằng nhà lãnh đạo đóng vai trò rất quan trọng trong việc quyết định thành công và thất bại của tổ chức. Vậy thì một nhà lãnh đạo thực sự là người như thế nào?
Tôi cho rằng điều kiện của nhà lãnh đạo là khả năng lãnh đạo và năng lực xúc tiến. Đầu tiên, khả năng lãnh đạo là khả năng dẫn dắt tổ chức một cách hiệu quả. Để làm được điều này, chúng ta cần phải quản lý nhân tài tốt, phải nỗ lực tìm kiếm nhân tài và phát triển năng lực. Và phải quyết định vai trò phù hợp với năng lực của mỗi người và giúp họ thực hiện tốt vai trò đó. Tiếp theo, năng lực xúc tiến là sức dẫn dắt công việc một cách hiệu quả hướng tới mục tiêu. Để làm được điều đó, các nhà lãnh đạo phải có năng lực vượt trội và phương hướng khi xúc tiến công việc cũng phải rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, còn có sự khiêm tốn, đạo đức, trách nhiệm là điều kiện của người lãnh đạo. Tuy nhiên, không được quên rằng có những điểm cần phải thận trọng. Một nhà lãnh đạo thực sự phải cảnh giác với những phán đoán độc đoán của bản thân trong việc lãnh đạo tổ chức. Theo đó, cần phải có thái độ đồng cảm và giao tiếp để có thể tiếp nhận ý kiến của các thành viên và đưa ra phương hướng.
Cuối cùng, tôi đã tóm tắt vai trò, điều kiện và điểm cần phải cảnh giác của nhà lãnh đạo. Để trở thành một nhà lãnh đạo chân chính, cần có khả năng lãnh đạo, thúc đẩy và lãnh đạo tổ chức, tôn trọng ý kiến và tích cách của các thành viên tổ chức, cần có thái độ nỗ lực để đồng cảm và giao tiếp.

Corrections

A leader is a person who can lead members in thean organization to achieve a common goal.

or "members of an organization"

Therefore, we can say that a leader plays a very important role in deciding the success as well theor failure of the organization.

this flows better

So what defines a true leader?

I assume that the conditions forneeded qualities of a leader are leadership skills and promotion skills.

I don't know what you mean by promotion skills. Based on what you say later, technical skills?

First, leadership skills include those abilities that guide and encourage a group of people toward achieving a set of goals.

To do this, they need to manage people well, try their best to find talents, and develop their abilities.

They also need to decide the suitable positions for each person and encourage them to play that role well.

or "encourage them to perform well in that role".

Second, promotiontechnical skills include strengths that to push work effectivecontribute significantly toward the goals.

or do you mean planning skills?

As a result, a leader when leading work needs to have outstanding abilities and clear direction.

or "when delegating work", "when managing their workload"

Moreover, a leader also needs to be humble, ethical, and responsible.

However, there are some points that we need to consider.

A true leader really needs to be aware of their own judgments in leading the organization.

I'm not sure what you mean by judgements. They need to be aware of their own biases?

Therefore, they should be able to have empathy and communication skills when receiving opinions ofrom other members/employees and then give a direinstructions.

Finally, I have summarized the roles, conditionsneeded qualities, and points to keep in mind of a leader.

I think I'd say "duties" instead of "roles"

In order to be a good leader, they need to have leadership skills, pushingand the ability to push/guide and leading the organization,. They need to respect the opinions and characteristics of the organization’s members, as wellnd make the effort to empathize and communicate.

This is how I would write this. Your list is slightly muddled as you mix nouns they should have as well as verbs they should do. I think splitting them makes it flow better.

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Good job, thoughtfully written!

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 13, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.
I want to use a word to define a skill that pushing a team, or speed up. For example, my team are doing a job, and a leader need to have a skill that they can make their team player do quicker, or more focus. That's the skill I want to mention but I haven't found out yet.
Yes, judgment I wrote = own biases.

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FieldQuartz

Dec. 13, 2024

0

the ability to meet deadlines / long-term planning / managing timelines / keeping their team on track / keeping their team on schedule

I'm not sure if there's a single word that captures the idea. I think the last option might be best for you

kailynhuynh96's avatar
kailynhuynh96

Dec. 14, 2024

44

Thank you so much for your suggestion.

Day 34

A leader is a person who can lead members in thean organization to achieve a common goal.

An would fit better than article 'the' because you have just introduced the noun 'organization'

Therefore, we can say that a leader plays a very important role in deciding the success as well the failure of the organization.

So, what defines a true leader?

comma after the word SO acts like a pause.

I assume that the conditions for a leader are leadership skills and promotion skills.

First, leadership skills include abilities that guide and encourage a group of people toward achieving a set of goals.

To do this, they need to manage people well, try their best to find talents, and develop their abilities.

They also need to decide the suitable positions for each person and encourage them to play that role well.

Second, promotion skills include strengths that to push work effectively toward theeffectively drive work toward achieving goals.

Incorrect use of "to" in "strengths that to push" it disrupts the sentence flow.
push work effectively toward the goals - this is vague and the reader is not able to understand the writer.

As a result, a leader when lead work need to haveneeds outstanding abilities and a clear direction when leading work.

I have just rearranged the statement to make it grammatically palatable

Moreover, a leader also needs to be humble, ethical, and responsible.

However, there are some points that we need to consider.

A true leader really need to be aware of their own judgments in leading the organization.

Therefore, they should be able to have empathy and good communication skills when receiving opinions of other members and then give a direction.

Finally, I have summarized the roles, conditions and points to keep in mind of, for a leader.

In order to be a good leader, they need to have leadership skills, pushing and leading the organization, respect the opinions and characteristics of the organization’s members, as well the effort to empathize and communicate.

Feedback

You did well, good luck. :)

kailynhuynh96's avatar
kailynhuynh96

Dec. 13, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.

Love_2024's avatar
Love_2024

Dec. 13, 2024

14

Anytime.

Day 34


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A leader is a person who can lead members in the organization to achieve a common goal.


A leader is a person who can lead members in thean organization to achieve a common goal.

An would fit better than article 'the' because you have just introduced the noun 'organization'

A leader is a person who can lead members in thean organization to achieve a common goal.

or "members of an organization"

Therefore, we can say that a leader plays a very important role in deciding the success as well the failure of the organization.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, we can say that a leader plays a very important role in deciding the success as well theor failure of the organization.

this flows better

So what defines a true leader?


So, what defines a true leader?

comma after the word SO acts like a pause.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I assume that the conditions for a leader are leadership skills and promotion skills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I assume that the conditions forneeded qualities of a leader are leadership skills and promotion skills.

I don't know what you mean by promotion skills. Based on what you say later, technical skills?

First, leadership skills include abilities that guide and encourage a group of people toward achieving set of goals.


First, leadership skills include abilities that guide and encourage a group of people toward achieving a set of goals.

First, leadership skills include those abilities that guide and encourage a group of people toward achieving a set of goals.

To do this, they need to manage people well, try their best to find talents, and develop their abilities.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They also need to decide the suitable positions for each person and encourage them to play that role well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They also need to decide the suitable positions for each person and encourage them to play that role well.

or "encourage them to perform well in that role".

Second, promotion skills include strengths that to push work effectively toward the goals.


Second, promotion skills include strengths that to push work effectively toward theeffectively drive work toward achieving goals.

Incorrect use of "to" in "strengths that to push" it disrupts the sentence flow. push work effectively toward the goals - this is vague and the reader is not able to understand the writer.

Second, promotiontechnical skills include strengths that to push work effectivecontribute significantly toward the goals.

or do you mean planning skills?

In order to be a good leader, they need to have leadership skills, pushing and leading the organization, respect the opinions and characteristics of the organization’s members, as well the effort to empathize and communicate.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In order to be a good leader, they need to have leadership skills, pushingand the ability to push/guide and leading the organization,. They need to respect the opinions and characteristics of the organization’s members, as wellnd make the effort to empathize and communicate.

This is how I would write this. Your list is slightly muddled as you mix nouns they should have as well as verbs they should do. I think splitting them makes it flow better.

As a result, a leader when lead work need to have outstanding abilities and clear direction.


As a result, a leader when lead work need to haveneeds outstanding abilities and a clear direction when leading work.

I have just rearranged the statement to make it grammatically palatable

As a result, a leader when leading work needs to have outstanding abilities and clear direction.

or "when delegating work", "when managing their workload"

Moreover, a leader also needs to be humble, ethical, and responsible.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, there are some points that we need to consider.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A true leader really need to be aware of own judgments in leading the organization.


A true leader really need to be aware of their own judgments in leading the organization.

A true leader really needs to be aware of their own judgments in leading the organization.

I'm not sure what you mean by judgements. They need to be aware of their own biases?

Therefore, they should be able to have empathy and communication skills when receiving opinions of other members and then give a direction.


Therefore, they should be able to have empathy and good communication skills when receiving opinions of other members and then give a direction.

Therefore, they should be able to have empathy and communication skills when receiving opinions ofrom other members/employees and then give a direinstructions.

Finally, I have summarized the roles, conditions and points to keep in mind of a leader.


Finally, I have summarized the roles, conditions and points to keep in mind of, for a leader.

Finally, I have summarized the roles, conditionsneeded qualities, and points to keep in mind of a leader.

I think I'd say "duties" instead of "roles"

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