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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 8, 2023

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Day 32: Language Exchange 2

Today I talked with an Australian girl on Discord. We have seventeen hour time difference. I really liked the Australian accent, I think that sounds quite similar to British accent but it's more understandable for me. She was very kind in correcting my speaking, now I know what I need to improve. I hope I can help her to practice her Spanish next time. Recently I have been interested about Canadian culture and Australian culture, so I'm going to read more articles related to them.

A time ago I used to put excuses to avoid speaking with native speakers. But now I think that it's a good opportunity to learn about other culture and have fun trying to express your thoughts to someone in your target language.
I think that trying to understand others is the best way to create good relationships and make peace. That's why I love language learning as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another culture in order to understand native speakers. If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it was to connect us.
Thanks for reading.

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Day 32: Language Exchange 2

Today I talked with an Australian girl on Discord.

We have a seventeen hour time difference.

わー!

I really liked ther Australian accent,. I think that it sounds quite similar to a British accentone but it's more understandable for me.

She was very kind in correcting my speaking, n. Now I know what I need to improve.

I hope I can help her to practice her Spanish next time.

Recently I have been interested aboutin Canadian culture and Australian culture, so I'm going to read more articles related to them.

ASome time ago I used to putmake excuses to avoid speaking with native speakers.

But nowNow, though, I think that it's a good opportunity to learn about other cultures and have fun trying to express your thoughts to someone in your target language.

そうですよね!

I think that trying to understand others is the best way to create good relationships and make peace.

That's why I love language learning as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another cultures in order to understand native speakers.

If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it wasrather to connect us.

Thanks for reading.

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いい話です。よく書けています!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 9, 2023

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ありがとうございました!! 😄

Day 32: Language Exchange 2

Today I talked with an Australian girl on Discord.

We have seventeen a 17-hour time difference.

I really liked ther Australian accent,. I think that it sounds quite similar to a British accent, but it's more understandable for me.

She was very kind in correcting my speaking, now I know what I need to improve.

I hope I can help her to practice her Spanish next time.

Recently I have been interested about Canadian culture and Australian culture, so I'm going to read more articles related to them.

A long time ago I used to putmake excuses to avoid speaking with native speakers.

"long time ago" can also be "while".

But now I think that it's a good opportunity to learn about other culture and have fun trying to express your thoughts to someone in your target language.

I think that trying to understand others is the best way to create good relationships and make peace.

That's why I love language learning as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another culture in order to understand native speakers.

If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it was to connect us.

Thanks for reading.

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Amazing job! Only a few tiny errors. I believe in you!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 9, 2023

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Thank you so much!!!

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Day 32: Language Exchange 2

Today I talked with an Australian girl on Discord.

We have a seventeen hour time difference.

I really liked the Australian accent, I think that it sounds quite similar to the British accent but it's more understandable for me.

She was very kind in correcting my speaking, now I know what I need to improve now.

I hope I can help her to practice her Spanish next time.

Your sentence isn't wrong, this is just another way to say it.

Recently I have been interested aboutin Canadian culture and Australian culture, so I'm going to read more articles related to them.

A long time ago I used to putmake excuses to avoid speaking with native speakers.

Alternatively, if it wasn't a 'long' time ago, you could just replace it with 'Before, I used to...'

But now I think that it's a good opportunity to learn about another culture and have fun trying to express your thoughts to someone in your target language.

I think that trying to understand others is the best way to create good relationships and make peace.

That's why I love language learning, as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another culture in order to understand native speakers.

If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it was to connect us.

You're talking about languages in general, so the article isn't necessary.

Thanks for reading.

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Very nice! This is making me want to go practice with a native speaker too lol

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 9, 2023

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I really suggest that you practice with a native speaker. Thanks for your corrections!

Day 32: Language Exchange 2

Today I talked with an Australian girl on Discord.

We have a seventeen hour time difference.

I really liked the Australian accent, I think thait sounds quite similar to the British accent, but it's more understandable for me.

She was very kind in correcting my speaking, n. Now I know what I need to improve.

I hope I can help her to practice her Spanish next time.

Recently, I have been interested about Canadian culture and Australian culture, so I'm going to read more articles related to them.

A long time ago, I used to putmake excuses to avoid speaking with native speakers.

But now, I think that it's a good opportunity to learn about other cultures and have fun trying to express your thoughts to someone in your target language.

I think that trying to understand others is the best way to create good relationships and make peace.

That's why I love language learning, as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another culture in order to understand native speakers.

If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but, it was to connect us.

Thanks for reading.

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Good job! You've made some good points about language learning and I agree that languages are meant to connect people. Also, I'm proud of you for talking with a native speaker! It must be nerve-wracking talking to someone in a different language. It's something I'm definitely afraid of doing, so good job! You're very brave.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 9, 2023

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The first time I felt nervous but eventually I got used to it. You should try to talk to a native speaker when you feel ready. Don't be afraid, almost everybody make mistakes but if you find someone to practice with, you can improve together!
If you ever need help with your spanish, feel free to let me know!

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Day 32: Language Exchange 2


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わー!

I really liked the Australian accent, I think that sounds quite similar to British accent but it's more understandable for me.


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She was very kind in correcting my speaking, now I know what I need to improve.


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Recently I have been interested about Canadian culture and Australian culture, so I'm going to read more articles related to them.


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A time ago I used to put excuses to avoid speaking with native speakers.


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Alternatively, if it wasn't a 'long' time ago, you could just replace it with 'Before, I used to...'

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"long time ago" can also be "while".

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But now I think that it's a good opportunity to learn about other culture and have fun trying to express your thoughts to someone in your target language.


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そうですよね!

I think that trying to understand others is the best way to create good relationships and make peace.


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That's why I love language learning as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another culture in order to understand native speakers.


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That's why I love language learning as I need to change the way that I think and learn about another cultures in order to understand native speakers.

If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it was to connect us.


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If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it was to connect us.

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If "God" created the languages, it wasn't to separate us but it wasrather to connect us.

Thanks for reading.


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