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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 9, 2024

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Day 31

Artificial intelligence (AI) is the core technology for future society, which used in almost every aspect in the modern era, medical facilities, self-driving cars, chatbots through kiosks. As a result, AI impacts on our lives in many ways. AI has a positive effect in the case of handling complicated tasks. However, it also causes several different problems.


Trí tuệ nhân tạo là công nghệ cốt lõi của xã hội tương lai, được sử dụng trên mọi phương diện trong thời đại hiện đại, từ các cơ sở y tế, tự lái xe, chatbot đến kiosks. Như vậy, trí tuệ nhân tạo có nhiều ảnh hưởng khác nhau đến cuộc sống của chúng ta. Trí tuệ nhân tạo có mặt tích cực ở chỗ nó có thể xử lý đơn giản những việc phức tạp mà con người khó làm, nhưng nó cũng gây ra nhiều vấn đề khác nhau.

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Artificial intelligence (AI) is thea core technology for future society's future, which is used in almost every aspect in theof modern era, medical facilities, self-driving cars, chatbots through, and kiosks.

Switch to an indefinite article and passive tense

As a result, AI impacts on our lives in many ways.

Preposition isn't necessary

AI has a positive effect in the case ofis particularly useful for handling complicated tasks.

I don't think there's anything grammatically wrong with your original sentence, but it's a bit unnatural to read, so I tried to preserve the same meaning in a more concise form

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 10, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.

Artificial intelligence (AI) is the core technology for future society, which is used in almost every aspect in the modern era,; this includes its use in medical facilities, self-driving cars, as well as chatbots through kiosks.

Breaking different thoughts into different sentences or separated by a semi-colon (;).

As a result, AI impacts on our lives in many ways.

However, it can also causes several different problems.

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 10, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.

Day 31

Artificial iIntelligence (AI) is the core technologya key component for future societyies, which is used in almost every aspect in the modern era,nowadays, such as medical facilities, self-driving cars, and chatbots through kiosks.

As a result, AI impacts on our lives in manynumerous ways.

I wanted to make this sentence sound more professional

AI has a positive effect in the case ofmakes it significantly easier to handlinge complicated tasks.

What complicated tasks can AI handle?

However, it also causes several different problems.

What are the problems caused by AI?

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I would go in more depth about the pros and cons of AI in your post. Otherwise, I just changed some things in the post to sound more professional, judging by the tone that you initially used.

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 10, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction and advice.

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marblemenow

Dec. 10, 2024

187

You're welcome.

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Artificial intelligence (AI) is the core technology for future society, which used in almost every aspect in the modern era, medical facilities, self-driving cars, chatbots through kiosks.


Artificial iIntelligence (AI) is the core technologya key component for future societyies, which is used in almost every aspect in the modern era,nowadays, such as medical facilities, self-driving cars, and chatbots through kiosks.

Artificial intelligence (AI) is the core technology for future society, which is used in almost every aspect in the modern era,; this includes its use in medical facilities, self-driving cars, as well as chatbots through kiosks.

Breaking different thoughts into different sentences or separated by a semi-colon (;).

Artificial intelligence (AI) is thea core technology for future society's future, which is used in almost every aspect in theof modern era, medical facilities, self-driving cars, chatbots through, and kiosks.

Switch to an indefinite article and passive tense

As a result, AI impacts on our lives in many ways.


As a result, AI impacts on our lives in manynumerous ways.

I wanted to make this sentence sound more professional

As a result, AI impacts on our lives in many ways.

As a result, AI impacts on our lives in many ways.

Preposition isn't necessary

AI has a positive effect in the case of handling complicated tasks.


AI has a positive effect in the case ofmakes it significantly easier to handlinge complicated tasks.

What complicated tasks can AI handle?

AI has a positive effect in the case ofis particularly useful for handling complicated tasks.

I don't think there's anything grammatically wrong with your original sentence, but it's a bit unnatural to read, so I tried to preserve the same meaning in a more concise form

However, it also causes several different problems.


However, it also causes several different problems.

What are the problems caused by AI?

However, it can also causes several different problems.

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