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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 6, 2023

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Day 30 of My English Challenge

Wow, today it's my day thirty of my English challenge. I have learned many things by writing every day in Langcorrect. I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak. Even when I have many things at hand I always try to post something to keep my streak. I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag give me in my pots. I'm so thankful to all of you!!!

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Day 30 of My English Challenge

Wow, today it's my day thirts the thirtieth day of my English challenge.

おめでとうございます!

Here, "today" is the subject.

また、

- Wow, today is the 30th day of my English challenge.
- Wow, today is day 30 of my English challenge.
- Wow, today is my 30th day for writing in English.

I have learned many things by writing every day in LangcCorrect.

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak for a habit.

Even when I have many things at hand I always try to post something to keep my streak.

I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag giave me in my pots.

やった!\o/

I'm so thankful to all of you!!!

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Well done! Remember, it's hard to break a bad habit but it's just as hard to break a good one. ^^

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 7, 2023

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Thank you for the encourage, I'll do my best to keep this habit

Wow, t! Today it's my day thirtys day 30 of my English challenge.

I have learned many things by writing every day in Langcorrect.

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.

Even when I have many things at hand I always try to post something to keep my streak.

I have also learned several things from the advice, which Mari, Frannie and Sennag give me in my pots.

I'm so thankful tofor all of you!!!

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Really good! Just a few small grammar mistakes. Good job!!!!!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 8, 2023

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Thank you so much for your corrections. I'll keep practising

Day 30 of My English Challenge

Wow, today it's mys day thirty of my English challenge.

I have learned many things by writing every daily in Langcorrect.

I have learned that I a'm more productive when I want to keep a habit streaktrack of my habits.

Even when I have many things at handgoing on, I always try to post something to keep my streak.

I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag have given me in my posts.

I'm so thankful to all of you!!!

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Good job, buddy! I admire the fact that you manage to write every day even when you have other things going on. You've made a lot of progress. Keep up the good work!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 8, 2023

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Thank you soo much for your amazing corrections and the encourage! 〵(^ o ^)〴

Day 30 of Mmy English Cchallenge

Wow, today it's my day thirty30 of my English challenge.

Normally after 10 you use numerals. For example 20, 30, 40

I have learnedt many things by writing every day in Langcorrect.

I have learnedt that I am more productive ( or organised) when I want to keep up a habit streak.

Even when I have many things at hand I always try to post something to keep my streak.

I have also learnedt several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag give me in my posts.

I'm so thankful to all of you!!!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 8, 2023

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Thanks for your amazing corrections!

Day 30 of My English Challenge

Wow, today it's my day thirty of my English challenge/it’s the thirtieth day of my English challenge.

Either one is correct!

I have learned/learnt many things by writing every day ion Langcorrect.

Learnt is more British
“I’ve been on this website since 2020.”
“Are you on the website?”
We always use the preposition ‘on’ !

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.

When + situation
Want would not be appropriate here; here are some example sentences where it would make sense:
“When I keep a streak, I am more productive.”
“I am not as productive when I don’t keep a streak.”
The formula is; “X happens when y happens.”, y being a situation.

This is hard to explain for me, if you need more help, let me know.

Even when I have many things at hand I always try to post something to keep my streak.

I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag have given me in my posts.

He has/she has/they have + past participle.
Me han dicho -> they have told me

I'm so thankful to all of you!!! / I am thankful for all of you!!!

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Congratulations Fernan, thirty days of consistency is something you deserve to be proud of! Happy studying 😁

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 7, 2023

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I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.

wow thanks for the explanation, so these sentence is it alright?
-I can't sleep when I drink so much coffee
-I like to run when the day is shining

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 7, 2023

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wow thanks for the explanation, so these sentence is it alright? -I can't sleep when I drink so much coffee -I like to run when the day is shining

*are these sentences correct?

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 7, 2023

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Thank you so much! I will keep my challenge. Your explanations are amazing I'm so thankful for you!

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frannie_

Feb. 7, 2023

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wow thanks for the explanation, so these sentence is it alright? -I can't sleep when I drink so much coffee -I like to run when the day is shining

Yes these are correct!! However just the usage of the situation to make it more natural:
“I can’t sleep when I drink too much coffee.”
“I like to run when it is sunny.”

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frannie_

Feb. 7, 2023

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That is ok Fernan it is a pleasure to read your work!

Wow, today it's my day thirtthe thirtieth day of my English challenge.

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 8, 2023

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Thank you!

Day 30 of My English Challenge


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Day 30 of Mmy English Cchallenge

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Wow, today it's my day thirty of my English challenge.


Wow, t! Today it's my day thirtys day 30 of my English challenge.

Wow, today it's my day thirtthe thirtieth day of my English challenge.

Wow, today it's my day thirty of my English challenge/it’s the thirtieth day of my English challenge.

Either one is correct!

Wow, today it's my day thirty30 of my English challenge.

Normally after 10 you use numerals. For example 20, 30, 40

Wow, today it's mys day thirty of my English challenge.

Wow, today it's my day thirts the thirtieth day of my English challenge.

おめでとうございます! Here, "today" is the subject. また、 - Wow, today is the 30th day of my English challenge. - Wow, today is day 30 of my English challenge. - Wow, today is my 30th day for writing in English.

I have learned many things by writing every day in Langcorrect.


I have learned many things by writing every daily in Langcorrect.

I have learned/learnt many things by writing every day ion Langcorrect.

Learnt is more British “I’ve been on this website since 2020.” “Are you on the website?” We always use the preposition ‘on’ !

I have learnedt many things by writing every day in Langcorrect.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have learned many things by writing every day in LangcCorrect.

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.


I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.

I have learned that I a'm more productive when I want to keep a habit streaktrack of my habits.

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak.

When + situation Want would not be appropriate here; here are some example sentences where it would make sense: “When I keep a streak, I am more productive.” “I am not as productive when I don’t keep a streak.” The formula is; “X happens when y happens.”, y being a situation. This is hard to explain for me, if you need more help, let me know.

I have learnedt that I am more productive ( or organised) when I want to keep up a habit streak.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have learned that I am more productive when I want to keep a habit streak for a habit.

Even when I have many things at hand I always try to post something to keep my streak.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even when I have many things at handgoing on, I always try to post something to keep my streak.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag give me in my pots.


I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag have given me in my posts.

He has/she has/they have + past participle. Me han dicho -> they have told me

I have also learnedt several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag give me in my posts.

I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag have given me in my posts.

I have also learned several things from the advice, which Mari, Frannie and Sennag give me in my pots.

I have also learned several things from the advice which Mari, Frannie and Sennag giave me in my pots.

やった!\o/

I'm so thankful to all of you!!!


I'm so thankful to all of you!!! / I am thankful for all of you!!!

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I'm so thankful tofor all of you!!!

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