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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 8, 2024

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Day 30

As a result, it is very important to study every day, even just a little bit, to learn a foreign language effectively. In case of learning a foreign language, daily effort is necessary and language skill can be improved through continuous learning. Taking advantage of different educational opportunities is also necessary to extend the ability for the natural communication.


Do đó để học ngoại ngữ hiệu quả mỗi ngày luyện tập dù chỉ là 1 ít rất quan trọng. Đối với việc học ngoại ngữ thì sự nỗ lực đều đặn là cần thiết và thông qua học tập liên tục năng lực ngôn ngữ có thể tiến bộ. Việc tận dụng cơ hội giáo dục đa dạng trong ngoài nước, cũng cần thiết cho việc mở rộng năng lực để có thể giao tiếp 1 cách tự nhiên.

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Day 30

As a resultPersonally, it is very important to study a foreign language every day, even just a little bit, to learn a foreign language effectively.

In case of learning a foreign languageanguage learning, daily effort is necessary and languagein my opinion, and skills can be improved through continuous learninglearning actively.

Some people in the language learning community don't think that it's necessary to do language learning every day, so this sentence would be in your own terms.

Taking advantage of different educational opportunities is also necessary to extendimprove the ability for theto naturally communicatione.

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Day 30

As a result, iIt is very important to study every day, even just a little bit, to learn a foreign language effectively.

You can't start a paragraph with "As a result" because there is no prior information

In the case of learning a foreign language, daily effort is necessary, and language skills can be improved through continuous learning.

Taking advantage of different educational opportunities is also necessary to extend thehelpful to improve one's ability for thein natural communication.

Changed the word to

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 9, 2024

44

Thank you for your correction.

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As a result, it is very important to study every day, even just a little bit, to learn a foreign language effectively.


As a result, iIt is very important to study every day, even just a little bit, to learn a foreign language effectively.

You can't start a paragraph with "As a result" because there is no prior information

As a resultPersonally, it is very important to study a foreign language every day, even just a little bit, to learn a foreign language effectively.

In case of learning a foreign language, daily effort is necessary and language skill can be improved through continuous learning.


In the case of learning a foreign language, daily effort is necessary, and language skills can be improved through continuous learning.

In case of learning a foreign languageanguage learning, daily effort is necessary and languagein my opinion, and skills can be improved through continuous learninglearning actively.

Some people in the language learning community don't think that it's necessary to do language learning every day, so this sentence would be in your own terms.

Taking advantage of different educational opportunities is also necessary to extend the ability for the natural communication.


Taking advantage of different educational opportunities is also necessary to extend thehelpful to improve one's ability for thein natural communication.

Changed the word to

Taking advantage of different educational opportunities is also necessary to extendimprove the ability for theto naturally communicatione.

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