Feb. 11, 2023
Day 3 Journaling
Hi,
Today I am going to schedule the homework I have for the holidays and organize my time to do all of this.
Yesterday I was supposed to have an English class at school but my teacher just had a traffic accident so she couldn't go to school. I hope this isn't too severe.
My grandparents are here for the weekend and I'll go to their house for a week. I'm really happy because they're old and not so far to die so I want to enjoy all the little things I can do with them.
I have started a book called "the Circle" by Dave Eggers and I think I will enjoy it because it's in the same field than Brave New World.
Hope you enjoyed your day and see you soon 😊
Day 3 Journaling
Hi,
Today I am going to schedule the homework I have for the holidays and organize my time to do all of this.
Yesterday I was supposed to have an English class at school but my teacher just had a traffic accident so she couldn't go to school.
I hope ithis isn't too severe.
My grandparents are here for the weekend andso I'll go to their house for a week.
I'm really happy because they're old and not so far to diefrom dying so I want to enjoy all the little things I can do with them.
I have started a book called "tThe Circle" by Dave Eggers and I think I will enjoy it because it's in the same field thanas Brave New World.
HI hope you enjoyed your day and see you soon. 😊
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Thank you! You, too! Good work!
Feb. 11, 2023
Thanks for the correction !
Today I am going to schedule the homework I have for the holidays and organize my time to ensure that I can do all of ithis.
"organize my time to do all of it." would also be ok, but this phrasing just emphasizes the reason for the scheduling a bit more.
Yesterday I was supposed to have an English class at school but my teacher just had a traffic accident so she couldn't go to school.
I hope this iit wasn't too severe.
There is some ambiguity as to what "it" refers to here so it might be better to specifically say either "I hope the accident wasn't too severe." or "I hope her injuries aren't too severe."
My grandparents are here for the weekend and I'll go to their house for a week.
I'm really happy bBecause they're old and not so far to dimight pass away soon, I'm really happy to be able sto I want tospend time with them and enjoy all the little things that I can do with them.
I have started a book called "tThe Circle" by Dave Eggers and I think I will enjoy it because it's in the same field thangenre as Brave New World.
"in the same field" would be used more for scientific/non-fiction books.
Hope you enjoyed your day and see you soon 😊
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Overall very well written! Be careful using "this" instead of "it". When you are using a standalone pronoun, "it" should be used most of the time. For example "I have a lot of homework. I will spend all day doing it." vs. "I will spend all day doing this homework."
Feb. 11, 2023
Thank you very much, I will take care of it!
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Today I am going to schedule the homework I have for the holidays and organize my time to do all of this. Today I am going to schedule the homework I have for the holidays and organize my time to ensure that I can do all of it "organize my time to do all of it." would also be ok, but this phrasing just emphasizes the reason for the scheduling a bit more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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