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bilmiyoruminan

July 24, 2025

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Day 3

Today is good for me because i am feeling peacefuly. Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten whole life. How are you feeling today? Everything is okay? I don't know who you are but I hope you are fine. We need to be fine last times. All of the world. I ate meat today. It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, coffee. Ahahah lots of drink because it's too hot still. It was very hot yesterday. I want to rain. I want to be cold everywhere anymore. Is it possible on summer?

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Day 3

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life.

How are you feeling today?

EIs everything is okay?

I don't know who you are, but I hope you are fine.

We need to befeel fine last timesin the end.

All of the world.

I ate meat today.

It was delicious, and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

Ahahah, lots of drinking because it's still too hot still.

It was very hot yesterday.

I want it to rain.

I want it to be cold everywhere anymorenow.

Is it possible onduring summer?

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly.

"peacefully" (also note there are two "l"s) is an adverb, so it's applied to actions. You're talking about yourself, so you want the adjective "peaceful" instead.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life.

EIs everything is okay?

We need to befeel fine last times.

Not sure what "last times" was meant to mean here.

It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

Ahahah, lots of drinks because it's too hot still.

I want it to rain.

"I want to rain" on its own implies you want cause rain or be the rain. If you just want rain to happen, you need to introduce "it" to the sentence.

I want to be cold everywhere anymore.

Is it possible onduring summer?

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten wholup an entire life.

EIs everything is okay?

I don't know who you are but I hope you are finealright.

We need to be fine last timesalright in the end.

It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

Ahahah lots of drink because it's stil too hot still.

I want it to rain.

I want it to be cold everywhere anymoregain.

Is it possible onduring the summer?

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Amazing job! You've spoken about a number of subjects really well, great work :)

Day 3


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Today is good for me because i am feeling peacefuly.


Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly.

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly.

"peacefully" (also note there are two "l"s) is an adverb, so it's applied to actions. You're talking about yourself, so you want the adjective "peaceful" instead.

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten whole life.


Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten wholup an entire life.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life.

How are you feeling today?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everything is okay?


EIs everything is okay?

EIs everything is okay?

EIs everything is okay?

I don't know who you are but I hope you are fine.


I don't know who you are but I hope you are finealright.

I don't know who you are, but I hope you are fine.

We need to be fine last times.


We need to be fine last timesalright in the end.

We need to befeel fine last times.

Not sure what "last times" was meant to mean here.

We need to befeel fine last timesin the end.

All of the world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I ate meat today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, coffee.


It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

It was delicious, and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

Ahahah lots of drink because it's too hot still.


Ahahah lots of drink because it's stil too hot still.

Ahahah, lots of drinks because it's too hot still.

Ahahah, lots of drinking because it's still too hot still.

It was very hot yesterday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to rain.


I want it to rain.

I want it to rain.

"I want to rain" on its own implies you want cause rain or be the rain. If you just want rain to happen, you need to introduce "it" to the sentence.

I want it to rain.

I want to be cold everywhere anymore.


I want it to be cold everywhere anymoregain.

I want to be cold everywhere anymore.

I want it to be cold everywhere anymorenow.

Is it possible on summer?


Is it possible onduring the summer?

Is it possible onduring summer?

Is it possible onduring summer?

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