Kindred Spirit

July 20, 2025

Day 3

Today, I woke up at 6:00 in the morning. I freshened up. I took a bath and had my breakfast. By then it was 8:45 , so I began research about coding with help of ChatGPT, I discovered that Java is the one of the best language for becoming a Full stack web developer ,it is quit challenging.
I created four month study schedule to work towards becoming a Full stack web developer, After that I made my lunch and ate it.

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By then it was 8:45 , so I began to research about coding with the help of ChatGPT,. I discovered that Java is the one of the best languages for becoming a Ffull stack web developer ,i. It is quite challenging.

You can also optionally (and maybe optimally) omit the word "about" in this context:

"I began to research [about] coding with the help of ChatGPT." The 'about' here feels a little heavy and redundant.



I created a four month study schedule to work towards becoming a Ffull stack web developer,. After that I made my lunch and ate it.

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Good writing! Some very simple sentences in the beginning. How can you rework them to make them have a little more impact?

Day 3

Today, I woke up at 6:00 in the morning.

I freshened up.

I took a bath and had my breakfast.

By then it was 8:45 , so I began researching about coding with help of ChatGPT,. I discovered that Java is the one of the best languages for becoming a Full stack web developer ,i. It is quite challenging.

I created a four month study schedule to work towards becoming a Full stack web developer,. After that I made my lunch and ate it.

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Today, I woke up at 6:00 in the morning.


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I freshened up.


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I took a bath and had my breakfast.


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By then it was 8:45 , so I began research about coding with help of ChatGPT, I discovered that Java is the one of the best language for becoming a Full stack web developer ,it is quit challenging.


By then it was 8:45 , so I began researching about coding with help of ChatGPT,. I discovered that Java is the one of the best languages for becoming a Full stack web developer ,i. It is quite challenging.

By then it was 8:45 , so I began to research about coding with the help of ChatGPT,. I discovered that Java is the one of the best languages for becoming a Ffull stack web developer ,i. It is quite challenging.

You can also optionally (and maybe optimally) omit the word "about" in this context: "I began to research [about] coding with the help of ChatGPT." The 'about' here feels a little heavy and redundant.

I created four month study schedule to work towards becoming a Full stack web developer, After that I made my lunch and ate it.


I created a four month study schedule to work towards becoming a Full stack web developer,. After that I made my lunch and ate it.

I created a four month study schedule to work towards becoming a Ffull stack web developer,. After that I made my lunch and ate it.

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