Nov. 11, 2024
First of all, the specific implementation of corporate social responsibility is to support public infrastructures. With roads, hospitals, schools, parks, etc., they can build facilities where needed with the support of the corporation. Additionally, corporations not only create the working environment but also regularly transfer donation to the government or the local government to serve the welfare of the poor and disabled people. Moreover, in order to protect the environment and develop long-term resources, they are investing heavily in researches on renewable and environmentally friendly energy. Hence, we cannot deny the important role of corporate social responsibility.
P/S: Thank you for your help.
Việc cụ thể thực hiện trách nhiệm xã hội của doanh nghiệp trước tiên là hỗ trợ cơ sở hạ tầng công cộng. Với đường xá, bệnh viện, trường học, công viên..., họ có thể xây
dựng các cơ sở vật chất ở nơi cần thiết với sự hỗ trợ của doanh nghiệp. Ngoài ra, doanh nghiệp không chỉ tạo ra môi trường lao động mà còn thường xuyên chuyển tiền quyên góp cho chính quyền hoặc chính quyền địa phương để phục vụ phúc lợi cho người nghèo và người khuyết tật. Ngoài ra, để bảo vệ môi trường và phát triển tài nguyên dài hạn, họ đang đầu tư nhiều vào nghiên cứu năng lượng tái tạo và thân thiện với môi trường. Theo đó, không thể phủ nhận vai trò quan trọng của trách
nhiệm xã hội của doanh nghiệp.
First of all, the specific implementation of corporate social responsibility is to support public infrastructures.
With roads, hospitals, schools, parks, etc., they can build facilities where needed with the support of the corporation.
The first and second sentences feel like they should be together.
I also removed the use of "they" and replaced it with passive voice since its not clear who "they" is supposed to be. It works here because the text is formal. See the changes below :
First of all, the specific implementation of corporate social responsibility is to support public infrastructure with roads, hospitals, schools, parks, etc. Facilities can be built where needed with the support of the corporation.
Additionally, corporations not only create the working environment but also regularly transfer donatione to the <X> government or the local government to serve the welfare of the poor and disabled people.
Not sure what you mean by:
"create the working environment"
You also seem to be mentioning multiple levels of government but the first mention is specific. Is it federal, municipal, or a different level?
Where the <X> is, you can mention the specific level of government that you mean.
"regularly transfer donation to the government or the local government"
Are these actual donations or do you mean taxes?
Moreover, in order to protect the environment and develop long-term resources, they arecorporations investing heavily in researches on renewable and environmentally friendly energynewable energy research.
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First of all, the specific implementation of corporate social responsibility is to support public infrastructures. First of all, the specific implementation of corporate social responsibility is to support public infrastructure |
With roads, hospitals, schools, parks, etc., they can build facilities where needed with the support of the corporation. With roads, hospitals, schools, parks, etc., they can build facilities where needed with the support of the corporation. The first and second sentences feel like they should be together. I also removed the use of "they" and replaced it with passive voice since its not clear who "they" is supposed to be. It works here because the text is formal. See the changes below : First of all, the specific implementation of corporate social responsibility is to support public infrastructure with roads, hospitals, schools, parks, etc. Facilities can be built where needed with the support of the corporation. |
Additionally, corporations not only create the working environment but also regularly transfer donation to the government or the local government to serve the welfare of the poor and disabled people. Additionally, corporations not only create the working environment but also regularly Not sure what you mean by: "create the working environment" You also seem to be mentioning multiple levels of government but the first mention is specific. Is it federal, municipal, or a different level? Where the <X> is, you can mention the specific level of government that you mean. "regularly transfer donation to the government or the local government" Are these actual donations or do you mean taxes? |
Moreover, in order to protect the environment and develop long-term resources, they are investing heavily in researches on renewable and environmentally friendly energy. Moreover, in order to protect the environment and develop long-term resources, |
Hence, we cannot denied the important role of corporate social responsibility. |
P/S: Thank you for your help. |
Hence, we cannot deny the important role of corporate social responsibility. |
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