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Day 29: Looking for a New Sport Part 1

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that can enjoy. I'm already thin, I just want to pratice a sport to say healthy, have fun and build muscle. I coming up with many ideas about sports that I could try.
The user Mari suggested that I could try dancing. I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing with my favorite songs could be fun!
I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, from her videos I got inspiration to try break dance. I want to try break dance for three reasons which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and last but no least because it's an olympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next olympic games. That means that it's definitely a sport however, of course I'm not going to be an olympic athlete. I think that I could also try to learn some choreographies of K-pop videos. Wish me luck!

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Day 29: Looking for a New Sport, Part 1

A goal that I set out for this year it's to find a new sport that I can enjoy.

I'm already thin,. I just want to ptraticein in a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

いいですよ。

I am coming up with many ideas about sports that I could try.

The user Mari suggested that I could try dancing.

I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing withto my favorite songs could be fun!

😊😊😊😊😊❤️

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, from her videoswhom I got inspiration to try break danceing.

やった!息子達はブレークダンサーです。B-girl AyumiとB-girl Amiって、初めて聞きました。ありがとうございました!

I want to try break danceing for three reasons which are: because: it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and, last but not least because it's, it will be an oOlympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next oOlympic games.

へー!オリンピックって、初めて知りました!またありがとうございました!

That means that it's definitely a sport, however, of course, I'm not going to be an oOlympic athlete.

I think that I could also try to learn some of the choreographies ofy in K-pop videos.

楽しそうです!The plural of "choreography" is the same as the singular form, "choreography."

Wish me luck!

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楽しみですね。よく書けています!

Day 29: Looking for a New Sport Part 1

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that I can enjoy.

“This year is the year I…”
“We can enjoy it together.” “I will enjoy it.”

I'm already thin, I just want to practicse a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

Practice - medical
Practise - improve

I’ve cominge up with many ideas aboutof sports that I could try.

“She came up with that answer.” “You’ve come up with a lot of good ideas.”

The user Mari suggested that I could try dancing.

I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing withto my favorite songs could be fun!

“She is dancing to the music.” “He is dancing to the song.”

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, from her videos I got inspired /I got the inspiration to try break dance.

I want to try break danceing for three reasons which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and last but not least because it's an olympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next olympic games.

That means that it's definitely a sport however, of course I'm not going to become an olympic athlete.

“She’s not going to become a dancer.” “She’s going to become a doctor instead.”

I think that I could also try to learn some choreographies of K-pop videos.

Wish me luck!

Feedback

Well done Fernan this was exceptional English and it was very natural, keep it up!!!

Day 29: Looking for a New Sport Part 1

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that can enjoy.

I'm already thin,. I just want to practice a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

I'm coming up with many ideas about the different sports that I could try.

The user Mari suggested that I could try dancing.

I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance, and dancing with my favorite songs could be fun!

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls, and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, f. From her videos I got inspiration to try to break dance.

I want to try to break dance for three reasons, which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body, and last but not least, because it's an oOlympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next oOlympic games.

That means that it's definitely a sport h. However, of course, I'm not going to be an oOlympic athlete.

I think that I could also try to learn some choreographies of K-pop videos.

Wish me luck!

Feedback

Good job! Dancing sounds like fun and it's something that isn't really stressful. Good luck with it!

Day 29: Looking for a New Sport Part 1

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that can enjoy.

I'm already thin, I just want to pratice a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

I’ve cominge up with many ideas aboutof sports that I could try.

The user Mari suggested that I could try dancing.

I really love theis idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing with my favorite songs could be fun!

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, f. From her videos I got inspiration to try break danceing.

I want to try break danceing for three reasons which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and last but not least because it's an olympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next olympic games.

That means that it's definitely a sport h. However, of course I'm not going to be an olympic athlete.

I think that I could also try to learn some choreographies of K-pop videos.

Wish me luck!

Feedback

Very good. Good luck with the dancing!

Day 29: Looking for a New Sport Part 1


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Day 29: Looking for a New Sport, Part 1

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that can enjoy.


A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that can enjoy.

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that can enjoy.

A goal that I set out this year it's to find a new sport that I can enjoy.

“This year is the year I…” “We can enjoy it together.” “I will enjoy it.”

A goal that I set out for this year it's to find a new sport that I can enjoy.

I'm already thin, I just want to pratice a sport to say healthy, have fun and build muscle.


I'm already thin, I just want to pratice a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

I'm already thin,. I just want to practice a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

I'm already thin, I just want to practicse a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

Practice - medical Practise - improve

I'm already thin,. I just want to ptraticein in a sport to stay healthy, have fun and build muscle.

いいですよ。

I coming up with many ideas about sports that I could try.


I’ve cominge up with many ideas aboutof sports that I could try.

I'm coming up with many ideas about the different sports that I could try.

I’ve cominge up with many ideas aboutof sports that I could try.

“She came up with that answer.” “You’ve come up with a lot of good ideas.”

I am coming up with many ideas about sports that I could try.

The user Mari suggested that I could try dancing.


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I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing with my favorite songs could be fun!


I really love theis idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing with my favorite songs could be fun!

I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance, and dancing with my favorite songs could be fun!

I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing withto my favorite songs could be fun!

“She is dancing to the music.” “He is dancing to the song.”

I really love the idea because one of my dreams is to learn to dance and dancing withto my favorite songs could be fun!

😊😊😊😊😊❤️

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, from her videos I got inspiration to try break dance.


I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, f. From her videos I got inspiration to try break danceing.

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls, and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, f. From her videos I got inspiration to try to break dance.

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, from her videos I got inspired /I got the inspiration to try break dance.

I have been watching videos of Japanese B-boys and B-girls and my favorites so far are B-girl Ayumi and B-girl Ami, from her videoswhom I got inspiration to try break danceing.

やった!息子達はブレークダンサーです。B-girl AyumiとB-girl Amiって、初めて聞きました。ありがとうございました!

I want to try break dance for three reasons which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and last but no least because it's an olympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next olympic games.


I want to try break danceing for three reasons which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and last but not least because it's an olympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next olympic games.

I want to try to break dance for three reasons, which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body, and last but not least, because it's an oOlympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next oOlympic games.

I want to try break danceing for three reasons which are: because it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and last but not least because it's an olympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next olympic games.

I want to try break danceing for three reasons which are: because: it's a mix between athletics and dancing, because it works the core body and the upper body and, last but not least because it's, it will be an oOlympic sport that it's going to be introduced in the next oOlympic games.

へー!オリンピックって、初めて知りました!またありがとうございました!

That means that it's definitely a sport however, of course I'm not going to be an olympic athlete.


That means that it's definitely a sport h. However, of course I'm not going to be an olympic athlete.

That means that it's definitely a sport h. However, of course, I'm not going to be an oOlympic athlete.

That means that it's definitely a sport however, of course I'm not going to become an olympic athlete.

“She’s not going to become a dancer.” “She’s going to become a doctor instead.”

That means that it's definitely a sport, however, of course, I'm not going to be an oOlympic athlete.

I think that I could also try to learn some choreographies of K-pop videos.


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I think that I could also try to learn some of the choreographies ofy in K-pop videos.

楽しそうです!The plural of "choreography" is the same as the singular form, "choreography."

Wish me luck!


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