Aug. 2, 2025
Day 28: Is this still the Earth?
Today I managed to see another piece of Africa. It was both interesting and frustrating. Ruins, trash, poor people everywhere. But some of them seemed happy. Maybe they are materially poor, but emotionally richer than wealthy people? Hm... I don't know. It was a strange day, but I appreciate having been able to experience all of this.
Day 28: Is this still the Earth?
Today I managed to see another pieceart of Africa.
It was both interesting and frustrating.
Ruins, trash, and poor people everywhere.
But some of them seemed happy.
Maybe they are materially poor, but emotionally richer than wealthy people?
Hm...
I don't know.
It was a strange day, but I appreciate having been able to experience all of this.
Aug. 3, 2025
Thank you. :)
Today, I managed to see another piece of Africa.
The comma is mainly used just to make a sentence easier to read and to allow for a chance to breathe when describing a given time and what happened within that time-frame. Also, maybe "piece" could be replaced with "region" or "part," depending on how specific you want to be, but this is optional if you want to keep things informal.
Hmm...
I've mostly seen this word with an extra "m" when people reflect on something, but either one might work.
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Overall, this was super clear! The corrections I made were more nitpicky than anything else. You're doing great!
Aug. 3, 2025
Thank you! :)
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Today I managed to see another piece of Africa. Today, I managed to see another piece of Africa. The comma is mainly used just to make a sentence easier to read and to allow for a chance to breathe when describing a given time and what happened within that time-frame. Also, maybe "piece" could be replaced with "region" or "part," depending on how specific you want to be, but this is optional if you want to keep things informal. Today I managed to see another p |
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It was both interesting and frustrating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ruins, trash, poor people everywhere. Ruins, trash |
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But some of them seemed happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe they are materially poor, but emotionally richer than wealthy people? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hm... Hmm... I've mostly seen this word with an extra "m" when people reflect on something, but either one might work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a strange day, but I appreciate having been able to experience all of this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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