Dec. 6, 2024
Day 28
Nowadays, due to the increasingly globalization society, learning foreign languages becomes more important. Thanks to globalization, the boundary of languages and countries have disappeared, and the economy and culture can be exchanged easily. Thus, jobs increased but the competition for jobs is still high. Moreover, because the communication, study and responsibility are no longer within in one country, so it is easier for people from several countries to exchange internationally. Therefore, if we want to grow up in this situation, learning one or more foreign languages becomes necessary.
Hiện nay xã hội ngày càng nhanh chóng toàn cầu hóa thì việc học ngoại ngữ càng trở nên quan trọng. Nhờ vào toàn cầu hóa, giới hạn của ngôn ngữ và quốc gia dần mất đi nên kinh tế, văn hóa dễ dàng có thể được giao lưu. Vì vậy, nghề nghiệp xuất hiện nhiều hơn nhưng sự cạnh tranh tìm việc vẫn cao. Hơn nữa, vì giao lưu, học tập, trọng trách không còn giới hạn trong 1 quốc gia nên càng dễ dàng cho việc người ở nhiều quốc gia giao lưu mang tính chất quốc tế. Do đó nếu muốn phát triển trong hoàn cảnh như thế này việc học thêm 1 ngoại ngữ trở lên trở thành điều cần thiết.
Day 28
Nowadays, dDue to the increasingly globalization society these, learning foreign languages becomes moreis important.
Thanks to globalization, the boundary of languages and countries have disappeared, and. Moreover, the economy and culture can be exchanged easily.
Thus, jobsthe number of jobs have increased but the competition for jobs is still high.
Moreover, because thSince communication, study and responsibility are no longer only within in one country, so it is easier for people from several countries to exchange internationallyinteract with each other.
Therefore, if we want to grow up in this situation, learning one or more foreign languages becomes necessary.
Dec. 7, 2024
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Dec. 7, 2024
You're welcome.
Nowadays, due to the increasingly globalization of society, learning foreign languages has becomes more important.
"has become" because you are talking about now. (Nowadays)
Thanks to globalization, the boundary ofbetween languages and countries have disappeared, and theso economy and culture can be exchanged easily.
"between" is more suitable.
"the" is unnecessary.
Thus, jobs increased but the competition for jobs is still high.
Moreover, because the communication, study and responsibility are no longer within inconfined to one country, so it is easier for people from several countries to exchangcommunicate internationally.
What do you mean by "study"? It doesn't make sense here.
Therefore, if we want to grow upbe successful in this situation, learning one or more foreign languages becomes necessary.
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Dec. 7, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Nowadays, due to the increasingly globalizationed society, learning foreign languages becomes more important.
Thanks to globalization, the boundary of languages and countries have disappeared, and the economy and culture can be exchanged easily.
Dec. 7, 2024
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Nowadays, due to the increasingly globalization society, learning foreign languages becomes more important. Nowadays, due to the increasingly globaliz Nowadays, due to the increasingly globalization of society, learning foreign languages has become "has become" because you are talking about now. (Nowadays)
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Thanks to globalization, the boundary of languages and countries have disappeared, and the economy and culture can be exchanged easily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Thanks to globalization, the boundary "between" is more suitable. "the" is unnecessary. Thanks to globalization, the boundary of languages and countries have disappeared |
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Thus, jobs increased but the competition for jobs is still high. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Thus, |
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Moreover, because the communication, study and responsibility are no longer within in one country, so it is easier for people from several countries to exchange internationally. Moreover, because What do you mean by "study"? It doesn't make sense here.
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Therefore, if we want to grow up in this situation, learning one or more foreign languages becomes necessary. Therefore, if we want to This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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