Feb. 3, 2023
Day 27: Creativity
I would like to know what I will become in the future as I truly don't know it. In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because since I was a child, I have always had a creative mind. When I was fifteen I tried to make a skateboard with my own design,a videogame and even I tried to create my own painting style trying to be like Picasso. I remeber that I tried to make a painting with sugar crystals and another with fire (because some chemicals create flames of different colors). At that time I didn't have discipline thus a lot of that projects never happened.
Nothing in life is secure that it's going to happen, that's why I don't know what I'm going to be in the future. I have clear goals in my life, like working in a creative job, but something could happen down the line and oblige me to change my goals. Whatever it happens, I will try to be happy.
Thanks for reading.
Day 27: Creativity
I would like to know what I will become in the future as I truly don't know it.
In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because, since I was a child, I have always had a creative mind.
It's a bit wordy to have the phrase "In my mind I see myself in the future..."
When I was fifteen, I tried to make a skateboard withfrom my own design, write a videogame, and even I tried to create my own painting style trying to be like Picasso.
Hmm, something feels off about this. I feel like it's the lack of parallelism with between: I tried to make a thing, a thing, and I tried to create a thing. I might suggest: I tried to make a thing, write a thing, and create a thing. Or: I tried to make a thing, a thing, and even a thing.
I remember that I triedrying to make a painting with sugar crystals and another with fire (because some chemicals create flames of different colors).
Just a bit more concise
At that time I didn't have discipline, thus a lot of thatose projects never happened.
Nothing in life is secure that it'sfor sure going to happen, that's why I don't know what I'm going to be in the future.
Secure feels weird here
I have clear goals in my life, like working in a creative job, but something could happen down the line and oblige me to change my goals.
Whatever it happens, I will try to be happy.
Feb. 4, 2023
Thank you!
Day 27: Creativity
I would like to know what I will become in the future as I truly don't know itnow.
私も！
In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because, since I was a child, I have always had a creative mind.
When I was fifteen I tried to make a skateboard withof my own design, a videogame and I even I tried to create my own painting style trying to be like Picasso.
すごい！
I remember that I tried to make a painting with sugar crystals and another with fire (because some chemicals create flames of different colors).
いいですね。
At that time I didn't have discipline thus a lot of thatose projects never happened.
aww. oh, well.
Nothing in life is secure that iin what's going to happen, so that's why I don't know what I'm going to be in the future.
I have clear goals in my life, like working in a creative job, but something could happen down the line and oblige me to change my goals.
Whatever it happens, I will try to be happy.
Good for you!
Thanks for reading.
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Feb. 4, 2023
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Day 27: Creativity
I would like to know what I wi'll become in the future, as I truly don't know it.
There's nothing wrong with "I will", but it almost sounds really formal when you don't have to be. Unless that's your intention, of course.
In my mind, I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because since I was a child, I ha've always had a creative mind.
Just like above, it's okay to write "I've" instead of "I have".
When I was fifteen, I tried to make a skateboard with my own design, a videogame and I even I tried to create my own painting style, trying to be like Picasso.
I remember that I tried to make a painting with sugar crystals, and another with fire (because some chemicals create flames of different colors).
At that time, I didn't have discipline t. Thus, a lot of thatose projects never happened.
Nothing in life is secure that iof what's going to happen, and that's why I don't know what I'm going to be in the future.
I have clear goals in my life, like working in a creative job, but something could happen down the line and oblige me to change my goals.
Whatever it happenis, I wi'll try to be happy.
You can also write: "Whatever happens" or even: "Whatever it happens to be"
Thanks for reading.
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Well done! I know that it can be hard to decide what you truly want to be in the future, no matter what field it is. I remember in my younger years I went through "career changes" all the time. Now, I'm an artist/painter.
Try not to worry too much about how things will turn out. Just hold on tight and enjoy the ride.
Feb. 4, 2023
That is exactly what is happening to me, I have carrer changes almost every year and I hate it. Thank you so much for your advice I'm going to try to hold on my dream of being a creative person.
Day 27: Creativity
At that time I didn't have discipline thuso a lot of thatose projects were never happenfinished.
Nothing in life is secure that it's going to happen, tguaranteed. That's why I don't know what I'm going to be in the future.
You could also use "certain" instead of "guaranteed".
I have clear goals in my life, like working in a creative job, but something could happen down the line and oblige me to change my goals.
Thanks for reading.
Feb. 4, 2023
Thank you!
Day 27: Creativity
I would like to know what I will become in the futuredo when I’m older as I truly don't know it.
Do = career wise, this is the most natural phrasing!
In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because since I was a child, I have always had a creative mind.
Lovely sentence!
When I was fifteen I tried to make adesign my own skateboard, with my owna design, from a videogame and I even I tried to create my own painting style trying to be likeas if I was Picasso.
This is how we’d say it :)
Also, word order!
A simile in the past; “as if I was…”
I remember that I triedrying to make a painting with sugar crystals and another with fire (because some chemicals create flames of different colors).
Spelling and natural phrasing
“I remember making my own t shirt.”
At that time I didn't have discipline thus I never finished a lot of thate projects never happenedthat I wanted to do.
Natural saying!
Nothing in life is secureguaranteed that it's going to happen, that's why I don't know what I'm going to be in the future.
Usage, guaranteed is what we’d say here!
I have clear goals in my life, like working in a creative job, but something could happen down the line and oblige me to change my goals.
Whatever it happens, I will try to be happy.
Thanks for reading.
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Lovely work Fernan as always if you need more examples or have questions please don’t hesitate to comment !!!
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I would like to know what I will become in the future as I truly don't know it. I would like to know what I will Do = career wise, this is the most natural phrasing! I would like to know what I There's nothing wrong with "I will", but it almost sounds really formal when you don't have to be. Unless that's your intention, of course. I would like to know what I will become in the future as I truly don't know 私も！ I would like to know what I will become in the future as I truly don't know |
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In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because since I was a child, I have always had a creative mind. In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because since I was a child, I have always had a creative mind. Lovely sentence! In my mind, I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job, because since I was a child, I Just like above, it's okay to write "I've" instead of "I have". In my mind I see myself in the future as an urbanist or working in a creative job
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When I was fifteen I tried to make a skateboard with my own design,a videogame and even I tried to create my own painting style trying to be like Picasso. When I was fifteen I tried to This is how we’d say it :) Also, word order! A simile in the past; “as if I was…” When I was fifteen, I tried to make a skateboard with my own design, a videogame and I even When I was fifteen I tried to make a skateboard すごい！ When I was fifteen, I tried to make a skateboard Hmm, something feels off about this. I feel like it's the lack of parallelism with between: I tried to make a thing, a thing, and I tried to create a thing. I might suggest: I tried to make a thing, write a thing, and create a thing. Or: I tried to make a thing, a thing, and even a thing. |
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