Aug. 1, 2025
Day 27: 35°C, 100% Humidity, and an Imerfect Day
Today I arrived to Africa for a little holiday. It was a strange day full of surprises. I still don't know if coming here was a good decision, but I wanted to see the continent.
The hotel is a nightmare. There wasn't even a pillow on the bed, when I got the room. The card lock wouldn't let me into the room, and then I got stuck in the bathroom because the door handle was broken...
I'm brutally tired. They said they'll bring me a pillow, but they didn't. But the sea view, and the food are great. Except which are not.
Day 27: 35°C, 100% Humidity, and an Imerfect Day
Today I arrived to Africa for a little holiday.
It was a strange day full of surprises.
I still don't know if coming here was a good decision, but I wanted to see the continent.
The hotel iwas a nightmare.
You seeing the hotel was a thing in the past, not current so it would be “was”
There wasn't even a pillow on the bed, when I got the room.
The card lock wouldn't let me into the room, and then I got stuck in the bathroom because the door handle was broken...
I'm brutally tired.
They said they'll bring me a pillow, but they didn't.
But the sea view, and the food are great.
There’s no need for a comma here
Except which are not.
Feedback
Overall very good, just some very minor errors, keep up the great work!
Aug. 2, 2025
Thank you. :)
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Today I arrived to Africa for a little holiday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a strange day full of surprises. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I still don't know if coming here was a good decision, but I wanted to see the continent. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The hotel is a nightmare. The hotel You seeing the hotel was a thing in the past, not current so it would be “was” |
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There wasn't even a pillow on the bed, when I got the room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The card lock wouldn't let me into the room, and then I got stuck in the bathroom because the door handle was broken... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm brutally tired. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They said they'll bring me a pillow, but they didn't. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But the sea view, and the food are great. But the sea view There’s no need for a comma here |
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Except which are not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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