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XIAOCHI

Jan. 4, 2026

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Day 26

I use public transport a lot, espcially when I was working in Shanghai.

The metro and buses are very cheap, usually costing 2 to 5 RMB, which is about 0.3 to 0.7 dollars. And there are a lot of stations in the city, making public transportation very accsessible.

After I returned to my hometown, driving became my main option instead.

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I used to use public transport a lot, espcially when I was working in Shanghai.

In the original sentence you had two tenses:

First: "I use public transport a lot," is continuous tense: (Yesterday, today and probably tomorrow) I use public transport a lot.
Second: "especially when I was working in Shanghai." is past tense (was): I used public transport a lot when I was in Shanghai.

In English the tense is the same within one sentence.

So you can make two sentences:
I use public transport a lot. I used it even more when I was working in Shanghai.

Or you can make the tenses the same:
I use public transport a lot, especially when I'm working in Shanghai.
I used public transport a lot, especially when I was working in Shanghai.

Looking at your other sentences it seems like you are thinking about the difference between your past (using public transport in Shanghai) and your present (driving in your hometown).

So I think you want to say: I used to use public transport a lot when I was working in Shanghai.

The metro and buses in Shanghai are very cheap, usually costing 2 to 5 RMB, which is about 0.30 to 0.7 dollars70 cents US.

We don't use percentages to refer to dollars. It changes to cents.

I think here you are referring to your time in Shanghai.

And there are a lot of stations in the city, making public transportation very accsessible.

Spelling of accessible.

After I returned to my hometown, driving became my main option instead.

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XIAOCHI

Jan. 8, 2026

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Thank you so much! It's super thorough!

Day 26

I used to use public transport a lot, especially when I was working in Shanghai.

Your last sentence makes it sound like you don't use public transport much anymore, so I changed this to past tense.

The metro and buses are very cheap, usually costing 2 to 5 RMB, which is about 0.3 to 0.7 dollars.

You could specify that you mean USD here.

And there are a lot of stations in the city, making public transportation very accsessible.

After I returned to my hometown, driving became my main option instead.

Feedback

Good job!

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curious_owl

Jan. 4, 2026

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Oops I forgot to add that there is a typo in the spelling of "accessible". No need for the extra S after the second C.

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XIAOCHI

Jan. 8, 2026

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Thank you so much! Have a great day!

Day 26


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I use public transport a lot, espcially when I was working in Shanghai.


I used to use public transport a lot, especially when I was working in Shanghai.

Your last sentence makes it sound like you don't use public transport much anymore, so I changed this to past tense.

I used to use public transport a lot, espcially when I was working in Shanghai.

In the original sentence you had two tenses: First: "I use public transport a lot," is continuous tense: (Yesterday, today and probably tomorrow) I use public transport a lot. Second: "especially when I was working in Shanghai." is past tense (was): I used public transport a lot when I was in Shanghai. In English the tense is the same within one sentence. So you can make two sentences: I use public transport a lot. I used it even more when I was working in Shanghai. Or you can make the tenses the same: I use public transport a lot, especially when I'm working in Shanghai. I used public transport a lot, especially when I was working in Shanghai. Looking at your other sentences it seems like you are thinking about the difference between your past (using public transport in Shanghai) and your present (driving in your hometown). So I think you want to say: I used to use public transport a lot when I was working in Shanghai.

The metro and buses are very cheap, usually costing 2 to 5 RMB, which is about 0.3 to 0.7 dollars.


The metro and buses are very cheap, usually costing 2 to 5 RMB, which is about 0.3 to 0.7 dollars.

You could specify that you mean USD here.

The metro and buses in Shanghai are very cheap, usually costing 2 to 5 RMB, which is about 0.30 to 0.7 dollars70 cents US.

We don't use percentages to refer to dollars. It changes to cents. I think here you are referring to your time in Shanghai.

And there are a lot of stations in the city, making public transportation very accsessible.


And there are a lot of stations in the city, making public transportation very accsessible.

And there are a lot of stations in the city, making public transportation very accsessible.

Spelling of accessible.

After I returned to my hometown, driving became my main option instead.


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