Dec. 3, 2024
Day 25
The greenhouse effect increases the temperature of the earth’s surface. The greenhouse effect’s initial cause is human activities and production. Because of the high demand for electricity and industrial production, a large amount of gas from fossil fuels which have been used is emitted. Additionally, because of the expansion of urban areas and the destruction of forests and farm have made the absorption of CO2 decreased and the increase in CO2 is the main cause of the greenhouse effect.
Hiệu ứng nhà kính làm tăng nhiệt độ cao của bề mặt trái đất. Nguyên nhân của hiệu ứng nhà kính đầu tiên là do sinh hoạt và sản xuất của con người. Vì nhu cầu của con người tăng cao làm việc sản xuất điện và công nghiệp tăng cao dẫn đến một lượng lớn khí gas được thải ra từ nhiên liệu hóa thạch đã được sử dụng. Thêm vào đó việc mở rộng quy mô đô thị và nông trại, rừng bị phá hủy nên khí Co2 được hấp thụ giảm và việc tăng khí Co2 là nguyên nhân chủ yếu của hiệu ứng nhà kính.
Day 25
The greenhouse effect increases the temperature of the eEarth’s surface.
The greenhouse effect’s initialprimary cause iss are human activities and production.
Because of the high demand for electricity and industrial production, a large amount of gas from fossil fuels whichthat have been used is emitted.
Additionally, because of the expansion of urban areas and the destruction of forests and farm have made the absorption of CO2 decreased and the. The (subsequent) increase in CO2 is the main cause of the greenhouse effect.
Dec. 4, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
The greenhouse effect’s mainitial cause iss are human activities and production.
Saying "initial" implies that you will follow up with a change in circumstances. For example, the initial causes are human activities and production, but now it's [x] and [y]. Also, it would be more clear if you specified what kind of production. I think you are likely referring to agricultural production in this context?
Because ofDue to the high demand for electricity and industrial production, a large amount of gas from burnt fossil fuels which have been used is emitted.
You can replace "which have been used" with burnt (because this is how the fuels are used) and use it as an adjective to describe the fossil fuels.
Additionally, because of the expansion of urban areas and the destruction of forests and farms have made the absorption of CO2 decreased and the increase in CO2 is the main cause of the greenhouse effect.led to an increase in carbon dioxide, the main greenhouse gas, due to less absorption.
Dec. 4, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
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Because of the high demand for electricity and industrial production, a large amount of gas from fossil fuels which have been used is emitted.
You can replace "which have been used" with burnt (because this is how the fuels are used) and use it as an adjective to describe the fossil fuels. Because of the high demand for electricity and industrial production, a large amount of gas from fossil fuels |
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Additionally, because of the expansion of urban areas and the destruction of forests and farm have made the absorption of CO2 decreased and the increase in CO2 is the main cause of the greenhouse effect. Additionally, Additionally, |
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The greenhouse effect increases the temperature of the earth’s surface. The greenhouse effect increases the temperature of |
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The greenhouse effect’s initial cause is human activities and production. The greenhouse effect’s main Saying "initial" implies that you will follow up with a change in circumstances. For example, the initial causes are human activities and production, but now it's [x] and [y]. Also, it would be more clear if you specified what kind of production. I think you are likely referring to agricultural production in this context? The greenhouse effect’s |
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