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DAEMONIC01

July 30, 2025

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Day 25: Random Thoughts

I think I should write earlier in the day. In the evenings I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it. Better later than never, but better sooner than later. But finally my book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) arrived and I started reading it. It's unputdownable. Funny word. If it's really exists. End of story. Maybe tomorrow.

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In the evenings I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later.

But finally my book I ordered (Andy Weir - 's "The Martian)" and it arrived and. I started reading it.

It's unputdownableaddicting.

that is NOT a word in english

Funny word.

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good

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DAEMONIC01

July 31, 2025

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https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/unputdownable
Thank you. :)

In the evenings, I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it.

Better later than never, but better sooner rather than later.

It's unputdownable can't put it down.

A common phrase you could use instead here is "it's a real page-turner" as it's said often by native speakers

If it's really exists.

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Great job! Hardly anything I needed to correct here, well done :)

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DAEMONIC01

July 31, 2025

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Thank you. :)

Better later than never, but better sooner than later.

But finally mythe book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) arrived and I started reading it.

If it's really exists.

I'm surprised that it really is a real word...

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DAEMONIC01

July 31, 2025

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Me too. I read it in a comment and searched for it. :D
Thank you. :)

Better later than never, but better sooner than later.

But finally myAnyways, the book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) finally arrived and I started reading it.

Can’t use a conjunction if you are trying to switch topics. i removed and changed the other of a couple words to make it read better.

It's unputdownableaddicting.

That’s not a word 😭😭😭, good attempt though. I fixed it to be correct, but a more fluid way of saying it would be to talk about yourself and not the book. For example: “I can’t stop reading it” or “I can’t seem to put it down.”

Funny word (If it really exists).

It flows better with the sentences connected. Of course, only include this if you keep the word you made up.

If it's really exists.

Same feedback as the last.

Maybe tomorrow.

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While short sentences aren’t a bad thing, they shouldn’t make up the while text. Longer sentences that make sense add more towards the fluidity of the text and make you sound better.

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ticklesur_pickle

July 30, 2025

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Also the last sentence is a little vague, maybe try describing what happens after tomorrow.

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rosemiya

July 30, 2025

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Unputdownable is in the oxford dictionary hahahaha

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DAEMONIC01

July 31, 2025

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Hah, that word is tricky... :D
Thank you guys! I wrote this text in a hurry, just wanted to be done and go to sleep. :)

I think I should write earlier in the day.


In the evenings I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it.


In the evenings, I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it.

In the evenings I struggle with writing, because I'm tired, and I don't feel like it.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later.


Better later than never, but better sooner than later.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later.

Better later than never, but better sooner rather than later.

Better later than never, but better sooner than later.

Day 25: Random Thoughts


It's unputdownable.


It's unputdownableaddicting.

That’s not a word 😭😭😭, good attempt though. I fixed it to be correct, but a more fluid way of saying it would be to talk about yourself and not the book. For example: “I can’t stop reading it” or “I can’t seem to put it down.”

It's unputdownable can't put it down.

A common phrase you could use instead here is "it's a real page-turner" as it's said often by native speakers

It's unputdownableaddicting.

that is NOT a word in english

But finally my book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) arrived and I started reading it.


But finally myAnyways, the book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) finally arrived and I started reading it.

Can’t use a conjunction if you are trying to switch topics. i removed and changed the other of a couple words to make it read better.

But finally mythe book I ordered (Andy Weir - The Martian) arrived and I started reading it.

But finally my book I ordered (Andy Weir - 's "The Martian)" and it arrived and. I started reading it.

Funny word.


Funny word (If it really exists).

It flows better with the sentences connected. Of course, only include this if you keep the word you made up.

Funny word.

If it's really exists.


If it's really exists.

Same feedback as the last.

If it's really exists.

I'm surprised that it really is a real word...

If it's really exists.

End of story.


Maybe tomorrow.


Maybe tomorrow.

Day 24: Random Thoughts


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