Dec. 2, 2024
Day 24
This failure is necessary for our growth. Therfore, the braveness after failing is also necessary. We need to know why we failed and in order to repeat the same mistakes, we must not be disappointed but have confidence that we can do it again. Once we overcome failure and take one more step, then we can get good results.
Thất bại này cần thiết cho sự trưởng thành của chúng ta. Do đó dũng khí không bỏ cuộc khi thất bại là điều cần thiết. Cần biết tại sao thất bại và để không lặp lại lỗi sai giống nhau thì không được nản lòng và có lòng tin có thể làm lại được. Khắc phục thất bại và nếu tiến thêm 1 bước nữa thì có thể nhận được kết quả tốt.
Day 24
This fFailure is necessary for our growth.
Therefore, the bravenesscourage after failing is also necessary.
We need to know why we failed and in order not to repeat the same mistakes, we must not be disappointed but have confidence that we can do it again.properly next time.
Once we overcome failure and take one morethe next step, then we can get good results.
Dec. 3, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
This fFailure is necessary for our growth.
"this" means there is a specific failure you've done and written about, that the reader is aware of. But you are talking about failure as a whole.
Therfore,Just as the braveness after failing is also necessary.
"Therefore" means "that is why", but these two sentences do not have a cause result relation. "Just as" fits better in this case.
We need to know why we failed and in order to not repeat the same mistakes, we must not be disappointed butand have confidence that we can do it againnext time.
"but" makes it sound like there are two opposing traits. (Good, bad)
"and" makes it sound like there are two similar traits. (Good, good;bad, bad)
These are both positive traits. Therefore, "and" fits better.
Once we overcome failure and take one more step, then we can get good results.
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Dec. 3, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
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This failure is necessary for our growth.
"this" means there is a specific failure you've done and written about, that the reader is aware of. But you are talking about failure as a whole.
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Therfore, the braveness after failing is also necessary.
"Therefore" means "that is why", but these two sentences do not have a cause result relation. "Just as" fits better in this case. Therefore, |
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We need to know why we failed and in order to repeat the same mistakes, we must not be disappointed but have confidence that we can do it again. We need to know why we failed and in order to not repeat the same mistakes, we must not be disappointed "but" makes it sound like there are two opposing traits. (Good, bad) "and" makes it sound like there are two similar traits. (Good, good;bad, bad) These are both positive traits. Therefore, "and" fits better. We need to know why we failed and in order not to repeat the same mistakes, we must |
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Once we overcome failure and take one more step, then we can get good results. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Once we overcome failure and take |
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