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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 1, 2024

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Day 23

First, you can take lessons and enlightenment through failure. Just being not given up in failure, flashback at why you failed and you can take the enlightenment. Understanding the reason of failure can help you to overcome the weaknesses and grow up. Moreover, you can also empathize with others through failure. People who almost experienced success may hardly understand those who have not succeed. Therefore, people who succeed a lot may easily criticize or ignore other people, but people who succeed with being failure in the past may sympathize with others and being humble.


Đầu tiên, bạn có thể nhận được những bài học và sự giác ngộ thông qua thất bại. Chỉ đơn giản là không kết thúc trong thất bại, nhìn lại tại sao thất bại và có thể nhận ra được sự giác ngộ. Việc tìm hiểu nguyên nhân thất bại có thể giúp bạn khắc phục điểm thiếu sót của bản thân và trở nên trưởng thành hơn. Không chỉ vậy, bạn còn có thể học được thái độ có thể cảm thông với người khác thông qua thất bại. Những người chỉ trải qua thành công khó có thể hiểu được những người chưa thành công. Vì vậy, những người chỉ thành công có thể dễ dàng phê phán hoặc phớt lờ những người khác, nhưng những người thành công khi trải qua thất bại có thể đồng cảm với những người khác và có thái độ khiêm tốn.

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First, you can takelearn lessons and achieve enlightenment through failure.

"Take lessons" means that someone like a teacher is teaching you a subject.

Just beingy not givening up inafter failure, flashlook back at why you failed and you can take thachieve enlightenment.

"Flashback" is just remembering the past. I changed it to "look back" since it's more used for when someone is reflecting on the past.

We don't say "take enlightenment." We can say achieve/reach/attain enlightenment.

Understanding the reason of failure can help you to overcome theyour weaknesses and grow up.

Moreover, you can also empathize with others through failure.

People who almosthave only experienced success may hardly understand those who have not succeeded.

Therefore, people who succeed a lot may easily criticize or ignore other people, but people who succeed with beinged after failureing in the past may sympathize with others and being humble.

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 2, 2024

45

Thank you for your correction.

Day 23


First, you can take lessons and enlightenment through failure.


First, you can takelearn lessons and achieve enlightenment through failure.

"Take lessons" means that someone like a teacher is teaching you a subject.

Just being not given up in failure, flashback at why you failed and you can take the enlightenment.


Just beingy not givening up inafter failure, flashlook back at why you failed and you can take thachieve enlightenment.

"Flashback" is just remembering the past. I changed it to "look back" since it's more used for when someone is reflecting on the past. We don't say "take enlightenment." We can say achieve/reach/attain enlightenment.

Understanding the reason of failure can help you to overcome the weaknesses and grow up.


Understanding the reason of failure can help you to overcome theyour weaknesses and grow up.

Moreover, you can also empathize with others through failure.


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People who almost experienced success may hardly understand those who have not succeed.


People who almosthave only experienced success may hardly understand those who have not succeeded.

Therefore, people who succeed a lot may easily criticize or ignore other people, but people who succeed with being failure in the past may sympathize with others and being humble.


Therefore, people who succeed a lot may easily criticize or ignore other people, but people who succeed with beinged after failureing in the past may sympathize with others and being humble.

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