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Day 22

It's another cloudy day, the kind of winter weather I hate the most. The gray sky always make me feel unenthusiastic. Thankfully it's weekend. I've got a whole list of TV series to watch. I'm planning to start with Welcome to Derry. I really like the way it builds a horror atmosphere.

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Day 22

It's another cloudy day, the kind of winter weather that I hate the most.

I hate the most.

The gray sky always make me feel unenthusiastic. (Lethargic, dispirited, sad)

Thankfully it's the weekend.

I've got a whole list of TV series to watch.

I'm planning to start with Welcome to Derry.

I really like the way it builds a horrorn atmosphere of horror.

Day 22

It's another cloudy day, the kind of winter weather

The gray sky always makes me feel unenthusiastic.

This is a simple conjugation error, your sentence is correct otherwise!

Examples:
The gray sky brings rain where I live.

Thankfully it's the weekend.

Native speakers tend to use 'the' before some ideas, especially 'the weekend'.

Examples:
Today was a good day. The weekend will be even better!

I've got a whole list of TV series to watch.

I'm planning to start with "Welcome to Derry".

This sentence is correct. In writing, we tend to surround the titles of books and movies with quotation marks ("").

I really like the way it builds a horror atmosphere.

Feedback

Great use of phrases that sound very native to me!
Using 'I really like' instead of 'I enjoy' is a very common structure in English, particularly in conversation.
You also have great conjunctions (it is => it's, we are => we're).
Excellent job!

Day 22


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It's another cloudy day, the kind of winter weather


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It's another cloudy day, the kind of winter weather that I hate the most.

I hate the most.


I hate the most.

The gray sky always make me feel unenthusiastic.


The gray sky always makes me feel unenthusiastic.

This is a simple conjugation error, your sentence is correct otherwise! Examples: The gray sky brings rain where I live.

The gray sky always make me feel unenthusiastic. (Lethargic, dispirited, sad)

Thankfully it's weekend.


Thankfully it's the weekend.

Native speakers tend to use 'the' before some ideas, especially 'the weekend'. Examples: Today was a good day. The weekend will be even better!

Thankfully it's the weekend.

I've got a whole list of TV series to watch.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm planning to start with Welcome to Derry.


I'm planning to start with "Welcome to Derry".

This sentence is correct. In writing, we tend to surround the titles of books and movies with quotation marks ("").

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really like the way it builds a horror atmosphere.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really like the way it builds a horrorn atmosphere of horror.

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