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kailynhuynh96

Nov. 30, 2024

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Day 22

As a human being, everyone wants to success and afraid of failure. However, in order to success, anyone can fail. For example, the child may need to fall many times to walk or a student may make several mistakes and practice continuously before getting good results. Many celebrities such as Bill Gates, Thomas Edison, etc. experienced many failures before being successful. Therefore, we cannot deny the importance of failure.


Là con người ai cũng thích thành công và sợ thất bại. Nhưng để thành công bất cứ ai cũng có thể phải chịu thất bại. Ví dụ đứa trẻ muốn đi được phải té nhiều lần hoặc học sinh nếu muốn có thành tích tốt thì có thể phải có nhiều lỗi sai và liên tục luyện tập. Những người nổi tiếng như Bill Gates, Edison, ... đã trải qua nhiều thất bại trước khi trở nên thành công. Do đó chúng ta không thể phủ nhận sự quan trọng của việc thất bại.

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As a human being, everyone wants to successed and is afraid of failure.

However, in order to successed, anyone can fail.

It is probably better to say everyone instead of anyone in this sentence.

For example, the child may need to fall many times to learn to walk or a student may make several mistakes and practice continuously before getting good results.

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 1, 2024

45

Thank you for your correction.

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Day 22

As a human being, everyone wants to be successful and is afraid of failure.

However, in order to success, anyone caned, you must not be afraid to fail.

For example, the children may need to fall many times to walk or a student may make several mistakes and practice continuously before getting good results.

Many celebrities such as Bill Gates, Thomas Edison, etc.

experienced many failures before being successful.

Therefore, we cannot deny the importance of failure.

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Good writing!

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kailynhuynh96

Dec. 1, 2024

45

Thank you for your correction.

Day 22


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As a human being, everyone wants to success and afraid of failure.


As a human being, everyone wants to be successful and is afraid of failure.

As a human being, everyone wants to successed and is afraid of failure.

However, in order to success, anyone can fail.


However, in order to success, anyone caned, you must not be afraid to fail.

However, in order to successed, anyone can fail.

It is probably better to say everyone instead of anyone in this sentence.

For example, the child may need to fall many times to walk or a student may make several mistakes and practice continuously before getting good results.


For example, the children may need to fall many times to walk or a student may make several mistakes and practice continuously before getting good results.

For example, the child may need to fall many times to learn to walk or a student may make several mistakes and practice continuously before getting good results.

Many celebrities such as Bill Gates, Thomas Edison, etc.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

experienced many failures before being successful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, we cannot deny the importance of failure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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