Nov. 28, 2024
Day 20
If we do not understand about different cultures, several problems are inevitable. Because each country has many different factors such as natural condition, history, etc., there are several different cultures. People who lives in diverse culture environment, if they only observe and evaluate other cultures with their own perspective, they will find it difficult to recognize and accept the differences. Moreover, prejudice will make the international communication becomes difficult. In the era of globalization, people from different cultures living together will cause various conflicts and affect the community’s life negatively.
Nếu không hiểu về các văn hóa khác nhau thì không thể tránh khỏi xảy ra vấn đề. Vì ở từng quốc gia thì có nhiều yếu tố khác nhau như hoàn cảnh tự nhiên, lịch sử, … nên có những nền văn hóa khác nhau. Những người ở trong bối cảnh văn hóa đa dạng nếu chỉ quan sát và đánh giá các nền văn hóa khác chỉ bằng qua điểm bản thân thì khó mà công nhận và tiếp nhận được điểm khác biệt. Không những vậy vì thiên kiến mà việc giao lưu quốc tế trở nên khó khăn. Trong thời đại toàn cầu hóa con người ở các nền văn hóa khác nhau cùng chung sống nếu không hiểu lẫn nhau làm xuất hiện hiện đa dạng mâu thuẫn gây ảnh hưởng xấu cuộc sống của cộng đồng.
If we do not understand about different cultures, several problems are inevitable.
Because each country has many different factors such as natural conditionenvironment, history, etc., there are several different cultures.
People who lives in a diverse cultureal environment, if they only observe and evaluate other cultures with their own perspective, they will find it difficult to recognize and accept the differences. / If people who live in a diverse cultural environment only observe and evaluate...
Use the adjective form of "culture" since it's also describing environment
Moreover, prejudice will make the international communication becomes difficult.
In the era of globalization, people from different cultures living together will cause various conflicts and affect the community’s life negatively.
Nov. 29, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Day 20
If we do not understand about different cultures, several problems are inevitable.
Don't need "about".
Because each country has many different factors within it such as natural conditionenvironment, history, etc., there are several different cultures.
People who lives in a diverse cultureal environment, if they only observe and evaluate other cultures withfrom their own perspective, they will find it difficult to recognize and accept the differences.
People is plural so who is referring to something plural.
Moreover, prejudice will make the international communication becomes difficult.
"international communication" is a generic thing so do not need definite article. It is also uncountable so no indefinite article needed.
In the era of globalization, people from different cultures living together will cause various conflicts and affect the community’s life negatively.
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Good work.
Nov. 29, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
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If we do not understand about different cultures, several problems are inevitable. If we do not understand Don't need "about". If we do not understand |
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Because each country has many different factors such as natural condition, history, etc., there are several different cultures. Because each country has many different factors within it such as natural Because each country has many different factors such as natural |
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People who lives in diverse culture environment, if they only observe and evaluate other cultures with their own perspective, they will find it difficult to recognize and accept the differences. People who live People is plural so who is referring to something plural. People who live Use the adjective form of "culture" since it's also describing environment |
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Moreover, prejudice will make the international communication becomes difficult. Moreover, prejudice will make "international communication" is a generic thing so do not need definite article. It is also uncountable so no indefinite article needed. Moreover, prejudice will make |
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In the era of globalization, people from different cultures living together will cause various conflicts and affect the community’s life negatively. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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