Jan. 10, 2024
Each new year, with the advent of a completely new year, it’s the appropriate moment to stop and think thoroughly about what you can do throughout the next year and find yourself knowing or doing something completely new by the end of it that you don’t know at the present. I think it’s a good start and a good exercise even if it might not have the return that you expect. Additionally, based on my experience, this kind of tasks where you keep it to yourself and think about life and future expectations may lead you to paths, even if sometimes unexpectedly, with new meaningfulness to add up to your life. However, since one must start from somewhere, my new resolutions are simple and very straightforward in the same direction that last year. Nevertheless, I’m fully committed to them and very enthusiastic to see how far can I go.
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Your sentences are slightly long and could be confusing, you might want to think about adding more full stops / periods instead of commas! Otherwise, you are doing very well. My corrections are mostly to help you to sound more natural.
Day 2 - New year's resolutions
Each new year, wWith the advent of a completely new year, it’s the appropriate moment to stop and think thoroughly about what you can do throughout the next year andto find yourself knowing or doing something completely new by the end of it that you don’t know at the present.
I think it’s a good start and a good exercise even if it might not have the return that you expect.
Additionally, based on my experience, thisese kinds of tasks where you keep it to yourself and think about life and future expectations may lead you todown paths, even if sometimes unexpectedly, with new meaningfulness to add up to your life.
However, since one must start from somewhere, my new resolutions are simple and very straightforward in the same direction thatas last year.
Nevertheless, I’m fully committed to them and very enthusiastic to see how far I can I go.
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Good luck!
Day 2 - New year's resolutions
Each new year, wWith the advent of a completely new year, it’s the appropriate moment to stop and think thoroughly about what you can do throughout the next year andyear. You may find yourself knowing or doing something completely new by the end of it that you don’t know at the present.
I think it’s a good start and a good exercise even if it might not have the returnoutcome that you expect.
"return" feels like you're expecting a beneficial result, or that you're only performing the action because you expect to gain from it. For example
- I got a good return on my investment
Additionally, based on my experience, this kind of tasks where you keep it to yourself and think about life and your future expectations may lead you to paths, even if sometimes unexpectedly, withhich add new meaningfulness to add up to your life.
However, since one must start from somewhere, my new resolutions are simple and very straightforward in the same direction thatas last year.
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Each new year, with the advent of a completely new year, it’s the appropriate moment to stop and think thoroughly about what you can do throughout the next year and find yourself knowing or doing something completely new by the end of it that you don’t know at the present.
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Nevertheless, I’m fully committed to them and very enthusiastic to see how far can I go. Nevertheless, I’m fully committed to them and very enthusiastic to see how far I can |
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