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July 24, 2025

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Hello everyone, today weather is so hot in Istanbul and I was in outside all day, I ate çiğ köfte (it is Türkiye's local flavor). I went home just now. It's 20.00 right now. What time is it in your country? I will watch HIMYM soon, I watched 6. seasons final episode. My dad just came from work( I looked this sentence from translate ;(
I want to eat dessert right now but I'm so tired for it. I will shopping for my univercity necessary presently. I'm looking for hair straightener, what do you suggest?

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Hello everyone, today the weather is so hot in Istanbul and I was in outside all day, I ate çiğ köfte (it is Türkiye's local flavor).

"outside" works as a direction by itself, so you don't need "in"

I will watch HIMYM soon, I watched 6. season 6's final episode.

My dad just came from work(. I looked up this sentence from a translateor ;(
I want to eat dessert right now but I'm
stoo tired for it.

I will go shopping for mythings I need for univercsity necessary presentlysoon.

I'm looking for a hair straightener, what do you suggest?

Day 2

Hello everyone, today's weather is so hot in Istanbul and I was in outside all day,. I ate çiğ köfte (it is Türkiye's local flavor).

I wengot home just now.

It's 20.00 right now.

What time is it in your country?

I willam going to watch HIMYM soon,. I watched 6.the sixth season's final episode.

My dad just came home from work( I looked up this sentence from a translateor ;(
I want to eat dessert right now
, but I'm so tired ofor it.

I will go shopping for my univercsity's necessary presentlyities.

I'm looking for a hair straightener, w. What do you suggest?

Day 2


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Hello everyone, today weather is so hot in Istanbul and I was in outside all day, I ate çiğ köfte (it is Türkiye's local flavor).


Hello everyone, today's weather is so hot in Istanbul and I was in outside all day,. I ate çiğ köfte (it is Türkiye's local flavor).

Hello everyone, today the weather is so hot in Istanbul and I was in outside all day, I ate çiğ köfte (it is Türkiye's local flavor).

"outside" works as a direction by itself, so you don't need "in"

I went home just now.


I wengot home just now.

It's 20.00 right now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What time is it in your country?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will watch HIMYM soon, I watched 6. seasons final episode.


I willam going to watch HIMYM soon,. I watched 6.the sixth season's final episode.

I will watch HIMYM soon, I watched 6. season 6's final episode.

My dad just came from work( I looked this sentence from translate ;( I want to eat dessert right now but I'm so tired for it.


My dad just came home from work( I looked up this sentence from a translateor ;(
I want to eat dessert right now
, but I'm so tired ofor it.

My dad just came from work(. I looked up this sentence from a translateor ;(
I want to eat dessert right now but I'm
stoo tired for it.

I will shopping for my univercity necessary presently.


I will go shopping for my univercsity's necessary presentlyities.

I will go shopping for mythings I need for univercsity necessary presentlysoon.

I'm looking for hair straightener, what do you suggest?


I'm looking for a hair straightener, w. What do you suggest?

I'm looking for a hair straightener, what do you suggest?

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