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Oct. 5, 2021

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DAY 2


Village was very peacefully until that day..... Big Dragon comes with anger and shouts to village :


Where is my little brother?!?!???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Villagers shocked they all started to run away as far as they can


Everybody escaped except Max and Amy


These kids scared too much.So, they said everything to Big Dragon


Big Dragon frustrated too much and asked with all of his anger :


Where is that WIZARD


Max and Amy pointed out the cave


Big Dragon flied to the cave and saw the wizard .


Wizard scared too much because this dragon is 2x bigger than before .


The wizard tried to escape but the dragon was too angry so he can't escaped .


HE should have fight with Dragon but how????


What should i use?


Fire can't affect him either water and other things


While he thinking Dragon ate him : ( F f bad ending


DAY 1- Night time 🌃


Villagers shocked they all started to run away as far as they can.


Everybody escaped except Max and Amy .


These kids scared too much.So, they сan't even move .


They said everything to Big Dragon .


Max and Amy pointed out the cave.


Wizard scared too much because this dragon is 2 times bigger than before .


(read the previous story)


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hello how are you fine thanks and you


hello how are you fine thanks and you

"Hello! How are you?" "Fine, thanks. And you?"

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