Aug. 1, 2020
Day 2
Hello again,
Yesterday I didn't have time to write my diary entry, but I'm writing now. Like we said in Spain: "better late than never".
It was my last day of work and after work, we went to lunch the whole department. Well, that's isn't correct exactly because some of my colleague couldn't come because they had to take a plane that same day.
I have not been in this job for so long, so it was a good opportunity for me to know better my colleagues.
We are a small company that develops equipment for military ships and planes. Especially, we develop displays and monitors.
Our main customer is Airbus, and this week we were in a bit of a hurry because Airbus was pressuring us to send some of our equipment, because they needed it for some of their planes, and they wanted it before we went on vacation. In the end, we could send them the equipment they wanted, so we left knowing we did good work, and we earned these vacations.
Thanks for reading me.
Hope you have a good day!
Day 2
Hello again,
Yesterday I didn't have time to write my diary entry, but I'm writing now.
Like we saidy in Spain: "better late than never".
It was my last day of work and after work, we went to lunch with the whole department.
Well, that's isn't correct exactlyexactly correct because some of my colleagues couldn't come because they had to takecatch a plane that same day.
"Well, that isn't exactly correct" sounds more natural to me. Same with "they had to catch a plane."
I have not been in this job for so long, so it was a good opportunity for me to know betterget to know my colleagues better.
We are a small company that develops equipment for military ships and planes.
EOur specially, weity is developing displays and monitors.
Our main customer is Airbus, and this week we were in a bit of a hurry because Airbus was pressuring us to send some of our equipment, because they needed it for some of their planes, and they wanted it before we went on vacation.
In the end, we could send them the equipment they wanted, so we left knowing we did good work, and we earned theseis vacations.
Thanks for reading me.
Hope you have a good day!
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Very good, just some small corrections. I hope you enjoy your time off!
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Hello again, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday I didn't have time to write my diary entry, but I'm writing now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like we said in Spain: "better late than never". Like we sa |
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It was my last day of work and after work, we went to lunch the whole department. It was my last day of work and after work, we went to lunch with the whole department. |
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That's isn't correct exactly because some of my colleague couldn't come because they had to take a plane that same day. |
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I have not been in this job for so long, so it was a good opportunity for me to know better my colleagues. I have not been in this job for |
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We are a small company that develops equipment for military ships and planes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Especially, we develop displays and monitors.
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Our main customer is Airbus, and this week we were in a bit of a hurry because Airbus was pressuring us to send some of our equipment, because they needed it for some of their planes, and they wanted it before we went on vacation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the end, we could send them the equipment they wanted, so we left knowing we did good work, and we earned these vacations. In the end, we could send them the equipment they wanted, so we left knowing we did good work, and we earned th |
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Thanks for reading me. Thanks for reading |
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Well, that's isn't correct exactly because some of my colleague couldn't come because they had to take a plane that same day. Well, that "Well, that isn't exactly correct" sounds more natural to me. Same with "they had to catch a plane." |
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