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Day 18: The Myth of “Wasted Time”

If something has no tangible benefit, we tend to think it's pointless. A short nap, taking a bath instead of a shower or even just not working nonstop all day. Everything has to have an exact purpose that justifies its value. If it seems worthless, many people feel dread about it. This pressure can be really hard to manage, so we often start avoiding these things, even though they have benefits, just not the ones we would expect from them.

"Every minute counts," they say. But what if it's a lie? Maybe it's just a big paperweight that puts pressure on our shoulders and chest, and forces us to scribble plans on napkins at breakfast or feel resentment if something what we do doesn't materially worth it. And that's it, we get duped.

One thing is true: time is really valuable. That's what we never gain, we only lose. But we cannot view it as only actions with material value that are worth our time. There are so many "worthless" things that we need to do, because they have immaterial benefits for us, our physical or mental health or simply just because they are fun. And fun things are valid. Maybe we should muster the courage to review our value system and free up some time for those things that simply feels good to us because maybe they're the ones that actually recharge us. If we give time to ourselves for these things, they'll help us spend the rest of our time more productively. And maybe we won't collapse after a hard day like a sack of potatoes.

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Day 18: The Myth of “Wasted Time”

If something has no tangible benefit, we tend to think it's pointless.

A short nap, taking a bath instead of a shower, or even just not working nonstop all day.

always need the oxford comma :)

Everything has to have an exact purpose that justifies its value.

If it seems worthless, many people feel dread aboutdread it.

alternatively, "feel bad about it"

This pressure can be really hard to manage, so we often start avoiding these things altogether, even though they have benefits, just not. They just might not be the ones we would expect from them.

The original was technically correct, but it bordered on becoming a run-on sentence, and this sounds more natural.

"Every minute counts," they say.

But what if ithat's a lie?

Maybe it's just a big paperweight that puts pressure on our shoulders and chest, and forces us to scribble plans on napkins at breakfast or feel resentment if something wthat we do doeisn't materially worth it.

"paperweight" works if that's what you meant exactly, but reads kind of awkward and random. "weight" or "boulder" would be more natural:

"... a boulder/weight resting on our shoulders..." is how native speakers normally express this idea

And that's it, we get duped.

One thing is true: time is really valuable.

That's whaty we never gain, we only lose.

But we cannot view it asbelieve that only actions with material value that are worth our time.

"But we cannot view it as only actions" technically works, but it's hard to understand and unnatural; this works better.

There are so many "worthless" things that we need to do, because they have immaterial benefits for us, our physical or mental health, or simply just because they are fun.

And fun things are valid.

Maybe we should muster the courage to review our value system and free up some time for those things that simply feels good to us, because maybe they're the oneat's twhat actually recharges us.

Just made it sound more natural in the end

If we give time to ourselves for these things, they'll help us spend the rest of our time more productively.

And maybe we won't collapse after a hard day like a sack of potatoes.

This works perfectly in terms of grammer, but would simply sound more natural as "And maybe we won't collapse like a sack of potatoes after a hard day."

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Great job! Your writing is completely intelligible, and your voice shines through. Other than a few small errors, I mostly only commented on how to sound most natural, how native speakers would phrase things. Overall fantastic writing :)

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DAEMONIC01

July 23, 2025

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Thank you so much! :)

Day 18: The Myth of “Wasted Time”


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If something has no tangible benefit, we tend to think it's pointless.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A short nap, taking a bath instead of a shower or even just not working nonstop all day.


A short nap, taking a bath instead of a shower, or even just not working nonstop all day.

always need the oxford comma :)

Everything has to have an exact purpose that justifies its value.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If it seems worthless, many people feel dread about it.


If it seems worthless, many people feel dread aboutdread it.

alternatively, "feel bad about it"

This pressure can be really hard to manage, so we often start avoiding these things, even though they have benefits, just not the ones we would expect from them.


This pressure can be really hard to manage, so we often start avoiding these things altogether, even though they have benefits, just not. They just might not be the ones we would expect from them.

The original was technically correct, but it bordered on becoming a run-on sentence, and this sounds more natural.

"Every minute counts," they say.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But what if it's a lie?


But what if ithat's a lie?

And that's it, we get duped.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One thing is true: time is really valuable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe it's just a big paperweight that puts pressure on our shoulders and chest, and forces us to scribble plans on napkins at breakfast or feel resentment if something what we do doesn't materially worth it.


Maybe it's just a big paperweight that puts pressure on our shoulders and chest, and forces us to scribble plans on napkins at breakfast or feel resentment if something wthat we do doeisn't materially worth it.

"paperweight" works if that's what you meant exactly, but reads kind of awkward and random. "weight" or "boulder" would be more natural: "... a boulder/weight resting on our shoulders..." is how native speakers normally express this idea

That's what we never gain, we only lose.


That's whaty we never gain, we only lose.

But we cannot view it as only actions with material value that are worth our time.


But we cannot view it asbelieve that only actions with material value that are worth our time.

"But we cannot view it as only actions" technically works, but it's hard to understand and unnatural; this works better.

There are so many "worthless" things that we need to do, because they have immaterial benefits for us, our physical or mental health or simply just because they are fun.


There are so many "worthless" things that we need to do, because they have immaterial benefits for us, our physical or mental health, or simply just because they are fun.

And fun things are valid.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If we give time to ourselves for these things, they'll help us spend the rest of our time more productively.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And maybe we won't collapse after a hard day like a sack of potatoes.


And maybe we won't collapse after a hard day like a sack of potatoes.

This works perfectly in terms of grammer, but would simply sound more natural as "And maybe we won't collapse like a sack of potatoes after a hard day."

Maybe we should muster the courage to review our value system and free up some time for those things that simply feels good to us because maybe they're the ones that actually recharge us.


Maybe we should muster the courage to review our value system and free up some time for those things that simply feels good to us, because maybe they're the oneat's twhat actually recharges us.

Just made it sound more natural in the end

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