Feb. 27, 2023
Hi 👋
Yesterday I didn't write because I had a really busy day.
I had to do the grocery shopping with my dad, then go to a football game, and think about renovate my phone.
I hope you had a good day to.
I had to do thego grocery shopping with my dad, then go to a football game, and think about renovateupgrading my phone.
I hope you had a good day too.
Day 18 Journaling
Hi 👋
Yesterday I didn't write because I had a really busy day.
I had to do thsome grocery shopping with my dad, then go to a football game, and think about renovateen I'm thinking about upgrading my phone.
This is a good sentence overall, just watch out for some minor details. First, instead of saying "the grocery shopping", it makes more sense to say "some grocery shopping". I don't have a real analytical explanation for this, but it's just more common from what I hear in the US. Second off, I would save the adverb "then" until you are listing the last thing you have done. If you add too many conjunctions and adverbs while listing off daily activities in the middle of your sentence, it can become very confusing for the reader to understand the main message. Finally, let's talk about the last part of your sentence. First off, I switched your main verb of the sentence from "renovate" to "upgrade". The reason I did this is because we don't renovate phones in English. We use the word renovate to describe things like to renovate a kitchen, a house, a system, or something large in size, but we don't renovate smaller things like our phones. Next, you're going to want to switch from using the present tense to the present progressive tense. Let's start with that last bit in present tense. This would be "I upgrade my phone". It's not terribly wrong, but you most likely want to express that you are in the process of upgrading your phone. This is where you want to use the present progressive tense. To form the present progressive tense, you use the verb ending "-ing". Now the sentence is "I'm upgrading my phone". This is already significantly better. Finally, let's combine this present progressive form with what you were trying to say earlier in that sentence. "I'm thinking about upgrading my phone". This is fully correct. Also, notice how the verb "think" changes to "thinking" as well.
I hope you had a good day too.
The word too is spelled "too" in order to express a meaning like as well (eg, I hope you have a good day too), whereas "to" spelled with one "o" is used to express things like the infinitives of verbs (eg. to walk, to sing, to run, etc..), or to express where you are going (eg, to the store, to the pool, to the garden).
Feedback
Overall, really nice job with your English. I hope you continue to practice and gain fluency, you are doing an awesome job.
I had to do thego grocery shopping with my dad, then go to a football game, and think about renovateing my phone.
just makes it sound better
Feedback
pretty good english ngl
Day 18 Journaling
Hi. 👋
Yesterday I didn't write because I had a really busy day.
I had to do the grocery shopping with my dad, then go to a football game, and think about renovateplacing my phone.
I hope you had a good day, too.
Feedback
Well done!
I had to do thego grocery shopping with my dad, then go to a football game, and think about renovateplacing my phone.
we usually renovate large structures like buildings and houses
Yesterday I didn't write because I had a really busy day.
I hope you had a good day to.
Feedback
Nice job, I hope it was a fun football game!
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