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Day 16: Weekly Reflections

Today is sunday in my country and every end of the week I write daily reflections about how it was my week in my bullet journal. This week I completed more tasks than the past week, to be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the past week I completed only nine tasks, so it's a good progress. I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem in my Job. The next week I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for the college exam and I'm going to start meditaiting, too. I also have to read more and write more poems.

This is not my poem I just translated and wanted to share it, the poem is by Ono No Komachi:

Because, meanwhile I was sleeping, I saw to my love
I started to wish something very ephemeral
like a dream.

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Today is sSunday in my country and every end of theevery week I write daily reflections about how it was my week went in my bullet journal.

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem ins occur at my Job.

The next week I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for thea college exam and. I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

I also have to read more and wriote more poems.

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You did awesome! what a great reflection. I hope the next week is better for you :)

Day 16: Weekly Reflections

Today is sSunday in my country and every, at the end of theevery week, I write my daily reflections about how it was my week went in my bullet journal.

This week I completed more tasks than the pastrevious week, t. To be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the pthis week and last week I completed only nine tasks, so it's a good progress.

おめでとうございます!

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem ins at my Job.

The nNext week I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for the college entrance exam and I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

いいですね。

I also have to read more and write more poems.

This is not my poem. I just translated it and wanted to share it, t. The poem is by Ono No Komachi:

Because, meanwhile I was sleeping, I saw to my love

I started to wish something very ephemeral

like a dream.

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きれいです。教えてくれてありがとうございました。上手にかけています!

Day 16: Weekly Reflections

Today it is sSunday in my country and everyat the end of theevery week I write dailya reflections about how it was my week went in my bullet journal.

More natural, word order !
I believe I have seen you omit the ‘it’ from the phrase ‘it is’ several times now, I would prioritise internalising the usage of this common grammatical conjunction !

This week I completed more tasks than the plast week, to be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the past week I completed only nine tasks, so it's aI’ve made good progress.

More natural, this is what we would say !

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem ins at my Jjob.

The nNext week I'm going to enroll into a course tso bethat I can prepared for thea college exam and. I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

I also have to read more and write more poems.

This is not my poem I just translated and wanted to share it, the poem is by Ono No Komachi:

Because, meanwhile I was sleeping, I saw to my love

I started to wish for something that was very ephemeral

like a dream.

Feedback

Beautiful poem, well done, congratulations on your progression!!

Day 16: Weekly Reflections

Today is sSunday in my country and everyat the end of theevery week, I write daily reflections about how it was my week was in my bullet journal.

This week, I completed more tasks than the past week, t. To be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the past week I completed only nine taskscompared to the nine tasks from last week, so it's a good progress.

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem in my Jobat work.

The nNext week, I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for the college (entrance) exam and I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

I also have to read more and write more poems.

This is not my poem. I just translated it and wanted to share it, t. The poem is by Ono No Komachi:

Because, meanwhile I was sleeping, I saw to my love

Not sure what this is supposed to mean.

I started to wish for something very ephemeral

like a dream.

Day 16: Weekly Reflections


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Today is sunday in my country and every end of the week I write daily reflections about how it was my week in my bullet journal.


Today is sSunday in my country and everyat the end of theevery week, I write daily reflections about how it was my week was in my bullet journal.

Today it is sSunday in my country and everyat the end of theevery week I write dailya reflections about how it was my week went in my bullet journal.

More natural, word order ! I believe I have seen you omit the ‘it’ from the phrase ‘it is’ several times now, I would prioritise internalising the usage of this common grammatical conjunction !

Today is sSunday in my country and every, at the end of theevery week, I write my daily reflections about how it was my week went in my bullet journal.

Today is sSunday in my country and every end of theevery week I write daily reflections about how it was my week went in my bullet journal.

This week I completed more tasks than the past week, to be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the past week I completed only nine tasks, so it's a good progress.


This week, I completed more tasks than the past week, t. To be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the past week I completed only nine taskscompared to the nine tasks from last week, so it's a good progress.

This week I completed more tasks than the plast week, to be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the past week I completed only nine tasks, so it's aI’ve made good progress.

More natural, this is what we would say !

This week I completed more tasks than the pastrevious week, t. To be exact, this week I have completed twenty tasks and the pthis week and last week I completed only nine tasks, so it's a good progress.

おめでとうございます!

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem in my Job.


I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem in my Jobat work.

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem ins at my Jjob.

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem ins at my Job.

I studied my Anki cards for six days this week and I didn't have any problem ins occur at my Job.

The next week I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for the college exam and I'm going to start meditaiting, too.


The nNext week, I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for the college (entrance) exam and I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

The nNext week I'm going to enroll into a course tso bethat I can prepared for thea college exam and. I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

The nNext week I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for the college entrance exam and I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

いいですね。

The next week I'm going to enroll into a course to be prepared for thea college exam and. I'm going to start meditaiting, too.

I also have to read more and write more poems.


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I also have to read more and wriote more poems.

This is not my poem I just translated and wanted to share it, the poem is by Ono No Komachi:


This is not my poem. I just translated it and wanted to share it, t. The poem is by Ono No Komachi:

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is not my poem. I just translated it and wanted to share it, t. The poem is by Ono No Komachi:

Because, meanwhile I was sleeping, I saw to my love


Because, meanwhile I was sleeping, I saw to my love

Not sure what this is supposed to mean.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I started to wish something very ephemeral


I started to wish for something very ephemeral

I started to wish for something that was very ephemeral

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

like a dream.


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