In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

But what if these aren't possible atfter all?

BecauseIt seems that your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now.

It is hard to write a good sentence that starts with "because". You finish a thought with "because", e.g. I am hungry because I woke up too late for breakfast.
Keep reading more English to see where do / did are used and where they are not used.

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Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe happened to be born?

In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

Of course right.

LangCorrect says you can learn foreign languages completely free if you correct what others wrote in your native language.

Sounds a bit better

But I came here with a native language, which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate.

Haha sorry for not learning Hungarian. It seems interesting by being one of the few European languages that are more difficult than Lithuanian, and being related to Finnish despite being so far away, and you guys have the family name - given name name order. But yeah most people won't study it :P

No, it's not.

Because your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now.

I don't think it matters where you live now as long as you have internet access.

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Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe were born?

There will always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.

In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

But what if these aren'is wasn’t possible at all?

Just a smalln example.,

I came here to learnimprove my English writing Englishskills, right?

Or you could say, “I came here to develop my English writing skills…”

Of course, right.

But I came here with aMy native language is Hungarian, which almost no one wants to learn, s. So I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate.

The sentence you wrote was grammatically correct.

Or because almost everyone can reach the internet in the worldin the world has access to the internet?

No, it's not.

Because your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now.

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Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe were born?

Or you could say, “Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where ONE WAS born?”

I think it's not.

Or you could say, “I don’t think it is.”

There will always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.

In this world, almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

Just a small example. -

I'd use a dash here to connect it to the next line, because you are about to introduce the example. But if you reversed and listed the example first, following with "Just a small example." would be logical

Of course (that's right).

More natural to leave the parentheses part off

But I came here with a native language, which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of themy correction rate.

Or "low correction ratio"

So is it equal to/fair for everyone because it's free?

"Fair" would be more commonly used here

Or because almost everyone can reachhas access to the internet in the world?

No, it's not.

Because your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now.

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Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe were born?

There will always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.