Today I am gonna show you what I did during my day.

Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine:. I did my daily Duolingo lesson,. I read a few pages of my current book (in English).

At 10 am I wrote the plan for an oral exam I have to do in 3 months.

Maybe you can think that it is in a lot of timthis is too early to prepare, but this is my first oral so I want to be really confident when it will comes.

After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the backyard to do some gardening.

back or frontyard?

To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I ambegan writing ✍️.

Thanks for the corrections !!!

Hi. 👋

Today I am gonnaing to show you what I did during my day.

"gonna" is slang. We can use it in writing but I wanted to make sure that you knew that it's slang.

Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and I ate breakfast alone.

Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson, I and read a few pages of my current book (in English).

At 10 am I wrote the plan for an (oral) presentation I have to dogive in 3 months.

Maybe you canYou might think that ithat is in a lot ofng time from now, but this is my first oralpresentation so I want to be really confident when it willthe time comes.

After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the yard to doand I did some gardening in the yard.

At 16 pm I read a few pages of my book and then I played with my brother and mother.

To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and thennow I am writing ✍️.

Thanks for the corrections !!!

Today I am gonnaing to show you what I did in my today.

"Gonna" is colloquial, you should write "going to" even in an informal journal like this one.

Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson, and I read a few pages of my current book (in English).

At 10 am I wrote the planoutline for an oral exam I have to do in 3 months.

Maybe you can think that it is inI still have a lot of time, but this is my first oral exam, so I want to be really confident when it willthe time comes.

After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father and I went to the yard to do some gardening.

In speech you can say "me and my father" but in writing you should write "my father and I blah blah blah"

At 164 pm I read a few pages of my book and then I played with my brother and mother.

To concludeAt the end of the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I amdid some writing ✍️.