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Day 16
Today, I went to the grocery store in town and bought some onions and cabbages. They're great for making salad. Only when I got back home did I realized that I forgot to buy eggs. It seems like a good idea to put everything you want to buy on a shopping list.
Today is really cold!
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Day 16 |
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Today, I went to the grocery store in town and bought some onions and cabbages. |
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They're great for making salad. |
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Only when I got back home did I realized that I forgot to buy eggs. |
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It seems like a good idea to put everything you want to buy on a shopping list. |
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