Jan. 22, 2023
Day 15: Developing the Habit of Finishing part 1
A problem that I have is abandon my ideas or personal projects. For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day and after about two weeks I quit. However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects. The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieve everything that we want. I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline. I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it. So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.
Day 15: Developing thea Habit of Finishing p, Part 1
A problem that I have is that I abandon my ideas or personal projects.
残念！
For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day and after about two weeks I quit.
However, today I haveToday, however, I read an article about how to finish our projects.
The article says that having deadlines and developing thea habit of finishing is key to achieve everything that we want.
I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.
I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.
So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.
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I highly recommend meditation. There are studies which show how the brains of Buddhist monks are less noisy than those who don't meditate. Meditation for 10 mins is good but even 8 mins is enough when you're starting out.
Good work!
Jan. 25, 2023
I'm going to try meditation again, I'll do my best! Thanks for all of your corrections!
AOne problem that I have is that I (tend to/often/always) abandon my ideas or personal projects.
For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day, and after about two weeks, I quit.
However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects.
The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieve (everything that/whatever) we want.
I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.
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This was well written and very relatable. I have a bad habit of starting things and dropping them soon after. Habits are so hard to develop, but I hope the article's advice works for you!
Jan. 25, 2023
I understand you, Starting new habits is always hard, I try to finish books to get used to finishing things, let's do our best!
Day 15: Developing the Habit of Finishing pPart 1
Grammatical consistency !
AOne problematic habit that I have is abandoning my ideas or personal projects.
Muy sofisticado
For example, three months ago I starttried to start meditate every day anding once a day, but after about two weeks I quitended up quitting.
Very natural, and the way you had it originally (I started to…) implies that you are still doing it, well emphasises it as if this is the fact of the matter. It makes more stylistic sense with the way a native would say it with my suggestion !
However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects.
The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieving everything that we want/the habit of finishing is the key to achieve everything that we want.
I hadoriginally started to meditateing because my mind iwas always distracting me when I'med whilst I was trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.
Tense consistency ! Stylistic preferences of a C1 native !
I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.
So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.
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Well done Fernan, I liked this reflective journal-styled text !
Jan. 25, 2023
Thank you!!
Day 15: Developing the Habit of Finishing part 1
A problem that I have is abandoning my ideas or personal projects.
or "A problem I have is that I abandon my..."
However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects.
The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieveing everything that we want.
I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.
I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.
So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.
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nice writing!
Jan. 25, 2023
thank you!!
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For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day and after about two weeks I quit. For example, three months ago I Very natural, and the way you had it originally (I started to…) implies that you are still doing it, well emphasises it as if this is the fact of the matter. It makes more stylistic sense with the way a native would say it with my suggestion ! For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day, and after about two weeks, I quit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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