Nov. 23, 2024
Day 15
The problem of population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem. If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to be decrease. If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty in developing.
Vấn đề của già hóa dân số là vấn đề kinh tế và sức khỏe tâm lý của người cao tuổi. Nếu tiếp tục già hóa xã hội thì dự đoán là sức lao động sẽ giảm sút. Nếu dân số có khả năng lao động giảm thì kinh tế có thể bị đình trệ và khó phát triển.
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Day 15
The problem ofwith an aging population aging is an economic problem and a problem for the elderly’s mental health problem.
The problem with an aging population is an economic problem and a problem for the elderly’s mental health.
Sounds more natural for the first part, and I believe this is what you meant by "and the elderly's mental health problem."
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to be decrease.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty in developing.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty developing.
Both would be correct, with or without the "in." Including the "in" sounds slightly more formal.
Nov. 26, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
The problem ofwith the population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem.
The problem with the population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem.
Nov. 26, 2024
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Day 15
The problem ofwith an aging population aging is anre economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem.
The problem with an aging population are economic and the elderly’s mental health problem.
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to be decrease.
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to decrease.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty in developing.
Nov. 26, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Day 15
The problem of population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem. The problem of population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem.
What do you mean by 'the elderly’s mental health problem'?
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to be decrease.
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to decrease.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may be stagnante and have difficulty in developing.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may be stagnant and have difficulty developing.
Nov. 26, 2024
When I wrote 'the elderly's mental health problem', I wondered whether an aging society may affect the elderly's mental health in a negative way. I meant if the labor force decrease-> Will it affect to the pension fund/ social insurance for the elderly?-> Will that affect the elderly's mental health?
Anyway, these are just my personal thoughts, I still have to think, read more books, and correct my thoughts.
Thank you so much for your question.
Nov. 27, 2024
You are welcome :)
Thank you for explaining ❤️
The problem of pPopulation aging is an economic problem and the elderly’sa mental health problem for the elderly.
Population aging is an economic problem and a mental health problem for the elderly.
You can also use the word "crisis," which is a severe problem affecting a population.
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to be decrease.
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted decrease.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty in developing.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty developing.
Alternative: If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and development may slow.
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Nice job!
Nov. 26, 2024
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Day 15
The problem of population aging is an economic problem, and the elderly’s mental health problemis also affected.
The problem of population aging is economic, and the elderly’s mental health is also affected.
If our society continues to rapidly age, the labor force is predicted to be decrease.
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty in developing.
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Good writing!
Nov. 27, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
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The problem of population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem.
The problem of population aging is The problem of population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem. The problem of population aging is an economic problem and the elderly’s mental health problem. What do you mean by 'the elderly’s mental health problem'?
You can also use the word "crisis," which is a severe problem affecting a population.
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If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty in developing. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty Alternative: If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and development may slow.
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If the working-age population decreases, the economy may stagnate and have difficulty Both would be correct, with or without the "in." Including the "in" sounds slightly more formal. |
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