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Day 15

Hi, Today I had a really good day. I started it by doing some revisions sheets and after that, I did my internship report because I have to finish it for Monday. Then I ate hotdogs with my family and I went to the mall to do the grocery with my dad.
I hope you enjoyed your day.

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Day 15

Hi, Ttoday I had a really good day.

I started it by doing some revisions sheets and after that, I did my internship report because I have to finish it for Monday.

Then I ate hotdogs with my family and I went to the mall to do the grocery shopping with my dad.

I hope you enjoyed your day.

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I started it by doing some revisions sheets and after that, I did my internship report because I have to finish it in time for Monday.

Then I ate hotdogs with my family and I went to the mall to do the grocery shopping with my dad.

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Hi, Today I had a really good day.

Hi, Ttoday I had a really good day.

I started it by doing some revisions sheets and after that, I did my internship report because I have to finish it for Monday.

I started it by doing some revisions sheets and after that, I did my internship report because I have to finish it in time for Monday.

I started it by doing some revisions sheets and after that, I did my internship report because I have to finish it for Monday.

Then I ate hotdogs with my family and I went to the mall to do the grocery with my dad.

Then I ate hotdogs with my family and I went to the mall to do the grocery shopping with my dad.

Then I ate hotdogs with my family and I went to the mall to do the grocery shopping with my dad.

I hope you enjoyed your day.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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