Nov. 22, 2024
Day 14
Nowadays, our society has entered the stage of the aging. The decrease in birth rate and the increase in average life expectancy as well as the increase in the elderly population over 65 years old is called an aging society. The reason may be because the number of young people who do not want to get married increases and the birth rate decreases because of getting married but not having children. The economic fluctuations and the burden of raising children may also impact negatively on the birth rate. The improvement in medical technology has helped people to live longer, so the increase in average life expectancy may also be a reason of this problem.
Dạo gần đây xã hội chúng ta đã bước vào trạng thái xã hội già hóa. Sự giảm sút tỷ lệ sinh và bình quân tuổi thọ tăng lên cùng việc gia tăng dân số già trên 65 tuổi được gọi là xã hội già hóa. Nguyên nhân của việc này có thể do số người trẻ không muốn kết tăng lên và tỷ lệ sinh giảm do dù kết hôn nhưng không sinh con. Tình hình kinh tế biến động và gánh nặng từ việc nuôi dạy con cái cũng có thể ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến tỷ lệ sinh sản. Và vì kỹ thuật y tế phát triển làm con người có thể sống lâu hơn nên bình quân tuổi thọ tăng cũng có thể là một nguyên nhân của vấn đề này.
Day 14
Nowadays, our society has entered the stage of the aging.
The decrease in birth rate and, the increase in average life expectancy as well as the increase in the elderly population over 65 years old is called an aging society.
The reason may be because the number of young people who do not want to get married increases and the birth rate decreases because of getting married but not having children.
The economic fluctuations and the burden of raising children may also impacthave a negatively on the impact on birth rate.
The improvement in medical technology has helped people to live longer, so the increase in average life expectancy may also be a reason of this problem.
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Nov. 26, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Nov. 27, 2024
You are welcome :)
Nov. 27, 2024
You are welcome :)
Day 14
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Good writing! Insightful
Nov. 26, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
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