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Day 13: Languages That I would Like to Learn

I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli. Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom with three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji. But there is more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikings history.
French is another one that I would like to learn because sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food. I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French could be easier for me. French is from the same language family than Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from French language.
I also really love how Italian is spoken, sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school. There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two. Maybe after mastering English language, I will start learning one of those. My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.

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Day 13: Languages Tthat I wWould Like to Learn

I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.

Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom with three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

But tThere isare more languages, however, that attract my attention, o. One of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikingsthe history of Vikings.

French is another one that I would like to learn because the sounds are very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French could be easier for me.

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from the French language.

本当?初めて知りました。

I also really love how Italian is spoken, s. Sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two.

また、

There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can only focus on just two.

Maybe after mastering English language, I will start learning one of those.

My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.

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応援しています!上手に書けています!

Day 13: Languages That I wWould Like to Learn (in the Future)

The general rule of thumb is capitalise all words except conjunctions !

I fell in love with Japanese when I first saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.

Japanese is tradictionally written in columns from top to bottom withand comprised a total of three writing systems, which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

But there isare more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikingsthe history of Vikings.

More natural word order !

French is another one that I would like to learn because it sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French cwould be easier for mepretty easy given the similarities of both of these languages to French.

I am assuming this is what you meant: this is a very sophisticated way to communicate it.

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from French languagecomprised of French words.

Sophisticated !

I also really love how Italian is spokethe sound of Italian, sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs whichthat I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

More natural !

There are many languages that I would like to tryattempt to learn, but, for now, I can just onlyam only able to focus on two.

Maybe after mastering the English language, I will start learning one of those.

My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.

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Well done, it is lovely that you are also considering the historical benefits of language learning in relation to Nordic!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 21, 2023

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aww thanks, I really love history, thanks for the corrections!

Day 13: Languages That I would Like to Learn

I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.

Japanese is tradictionally written in columns from top to bottom with, and has three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

--spelling of traditionally
--The first way you worded things was fine, a little clunky and unnatural though but still easily understood. The changes I made are just suggestions to help the "flow"

But there isare more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikings history.

--"More languages" is plural, so "is" is used here.
--"Viking" does not need to be plural here.

French is another one that I would like to learn because sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French could be easier for me.

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from the French language.

--"Than" contrasts an idea and here you're saying French and Spanish are similar, so "as" should be used.
--I don't know why, but "French language" should take a definite article here.

I also really love how Italian is spoken, s. Sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

-Punctuation to break up the run-on sentence.
-"From memory" isn't necessary here.

There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two.

"Just" is redundant here

Maybe after mastering the English language, I will start learning one of those languages.

-article needed
-Actually you can probably keep the ending and still be understood fluently, natives often do, it's just not "grammatically correct" to do so. I believe the reason is to make it a "complete sentence/complete thought."

My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.

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Good luck learning Japanese! I know it's not easier for us language learners to stick with just one, I admire your discipline!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 23, 2023

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Thanks for the compliment and for your corrections!

Day 13: Languages Tthat I would Llike to Llearn

Normally we wouldn’t capitalise ever word

I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing systhe way it is writtemn in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.

Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom withusing three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

But there isare more languages that attract my attention, one of thosewhich is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordicits mythology and Vikings history.

French is another one that I would like to learn because it sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of the English vocabulary is from French language.

I also really love how Italian is spoken, s. Sometimes, when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

I would guest making your sentences shorter.

MaybePerhaps after mastering the English language, I will start learning one of thosee others.

My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 23, 2023

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Thank you!

Day 13: Languages That I would Like to Learn


Day 13: Languages Tthat I would Llike to Llearn

Normally we wouldn’t capitalise ever word

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Day 13: Languages That I wWould Like to Learn (in the Future)

The general rule of thumb is capitalise all words except conjunctions !

Day 13: Languages Tthat I wWould Like to Learn

I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.


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I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing systhe way it is writtemn in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.

I fell in love with Japanese when I first saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli.

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Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom with three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.


Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom withusing three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

Japanese is tradictionally written in columns from top to bottom with, and has three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

--spelling of traditionally --The first way you worded things was fine, a little clunky and unnatural though but still easily understood. The changes I made are just suggestions to help the "flow"

Japanese is tradictionally written in columns from top to bottom withand comprised a total of three writing systems, which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom with three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji.

But there is more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikings history.


But there isare more languages that attract my attention, one of thosewhich is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordicits mythology and Vikings history.

But there isare more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikings history.

--"More languages" is plural, so "is" is used here. --"Viking" does not need to be plural here.

But there isare more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikingsthe history of Vikings.

More natural word order !

But tThere isare more languages, however, that attract my attention, o. One of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikingsthe history of Vikings.

French is another one that I would like to learn because sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.


French is another one that I would like to learn because it sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

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French is another one that I would like to learn because it sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

French is another one that I would like to learn because the sounds are very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food.

I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French could be easier for me, French is from the same language family than Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from French language.


I also really love how Italian is spoken, sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.


I also really love how Italian is spoken, s. Sometimes, when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

I would guest making your sentences shorter.

I also really love how Italian is spoken, s. Sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

-Punctuation to break up the run-on sentence. -"From memory" isn't necessary here.

I also really love how Italian is spokethe sound of Italian, sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs whichthat I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

More natural !

I also really love how Italian is spoken, s. Sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school.

There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two.


There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two.

"Just" is redundant here

There are many languages that I would like to tryattempt to learn, but, for now, I can just onlyam only able to focus on two.

There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two.

また、 There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can only focus on just two.

Maybe after mastering English language, I will start learning one of those.


MaybePerhaps after mastering the English language, I will start learning one of thosee others.

Maybe after mastering the English language, I will start learning one of those languages.

-article needed -Actually you can probably keep the ending and still be understood fluently, natives often do, it's just not "grammatically correct" to do so. I believe the reason is to make it a "complete sentence/complete thought."

Maybe after mastering the English language, I will start learning one of those.

Maybe after mastering English language, I will start learning one of those.

My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.


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I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French could be easier for me.


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I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French cwould be easier for mepretty easy given the similarities of both of these languages to French.

I am assuming this is what you meant: this is a very sophisticated way to communicate it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

French is from the same language family than Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from French language.


French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of the English vocabulary is from French language.

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from the French language.

--"Than" contrasts an idea and here you're saying French and Spanish are similar, so "as" should be used. --I don't know why, but "French language" should take a definite article here.

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from French languagecomprised of French words.

Sophisticated !

French is from the same language family thanas Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from the French language.

本当?初めて知りました。

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